Editing- Improving grammar, flow and polishing the content/lower word count

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 Proof reading, Improving grammar, flow and polishing the content. 

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Please try to keep the same theme as they are related to my career progression and work experience. Both these essays have to be under 750 words. Currently both of them are over 1000 words. I have a habit of writing very complex sentences. I am sure once you help write them in simplified flow the word count will go lower.  



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 Essay 1

Legendary UCLA basketball Coach John Wooden once said that one’s leadership is derived from one’s character. Please provide an example of a time when your own leadership was at its best. (750 words maximum)

Essay 2

 Why is it important to pursue an MBA at this particular time in your career? (750 words maximum)

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