edit Paper paper recommendations

My paper was review by online writing service.  Looking for someone to make the corrections.  I will provide the paper that need changes.

Hello Calvin, my name is Karen. Welcome to the Online Writing Center (OWC). While I cannot edit the paper for you, I will make some helpful suggestions and point out errors. I will be looking for patterns of error and will not point the things you can look for during your revising and editing. If the error occurs throughout the paper, I will add the words, Apply Throughout, to alert you to look for the of error.