edit my paper as shown on the comments

i need you to edit my paper as the comment in ( paper ) word document Also as my professor's paper. Also it should be the same format as in paperassignment word document, The article is in the Paperassignment word document.

My professor's comment:

Hi

 This is an improvement, but still needs work. You still need to work on the examples you present in the intro. Why did you take away his personal story? That was a good example! Lynching is also a good one, but the others are too general. See my comments and let me know if you have any questions.  I think one of the problems is that you are having a hard time understanding Stevenson's article. I would suggest that you reread it and highlight Stevenson's main points by writing them in the margins of the hard copy. That's what I did and it helps me to understand the entire article and find important information when I reread it.