E 111 comparative
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ENG111COMPARATIVEESSAYINSTRUCTIONS.docx
INSTRUCTIONS
To prepare the final draft of Writing Project 2: Comparative Analysis, do the following:
1. Start with your half-draft. Continue to add and develop your body paragraphs comparing the two readings. Also, add a concluding paragraph.
2. Review feedback from your instructor (in Grades) on your final draft of Writing Project 1 and/or the half draft of this project, from your peers (in M05 Peer Response--Writing Project 2: Comparative Analysis Half Draft), and from your Tutor.com tutoring session, and revise your draft based on this feedback.
3. Review the instructions for Writing Project 2 (in Module 5). Compare your draft to the instructions, looking for areas requiring further development. Revise your draft to address any issues that you found.
4. Finally, submit your final draft of Writing Project 2 here for instructor grading. Submit your draft as a Word document. (If using Google Docs, do the following to convert your file: go to File / Download and select Microsoft Word (.docx); then name and save your file.) You may also write a message to your instructor in the text box (optional).
Assignment Summary
Final Draft
· Clearly developed thesis statement that takes a position about the similarities and differences between the two closed research theme readings
· An introductory paragraph that attempts to gain the interest of reader, introduces the closed research theme readings, and presents the thesis statement
· Body paragraphs that compare and analyze key similarities and differences between the closed research theme readings, with topic sentences and transitions
· Well-reasoned analysis based on relevant and complex comparisons, illustrated and supported with evidence from the closed research theme readings
· A concluding paragraph
· In-text citations of “They Say” summaries and quotations of the closed research theme readings and other sources you might use
· APA or MLA style formatting, as specified by your instructor, with a References (APA) or Works Cited (MLA) page
· Observation of the conventions of Standard Written American English
· Minimum 1000 words for the final draft (Works Cited or References list does not count in the minimum word-count requirement)
· See the assessment rubric on the assignment page “M05 Writing Project 2 Comparative Analysis: Final Draft” for an understanding of how the final draft will be graded
ENG111Module4Project2ComparativeAnalysiSHalfDraft.docx
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Mikia Wilson
Eng 111
Module 4 Half Draft
9/12/2024
"Learning to Read" by Fredrick Douglass and "Literacy Debate: Online, R U Really Reading" by Motoko Rich are the readings that I have chosen to compare in my analysis. Although both stories are about reading, one tells the story of the author's early years, during which he taught himself to read, and the other presents the arguments for and against allowing children and teenagers to read online. There is a significant difference between the two stories. According to my point of view, the struggles that Frederick Douglass faced in order to become literate highlight the contrast between reading during the time of slavery and reading in the digital age. Because it is now possible for anyone to read anything online, it appears that young people in today's society do not place the same level of importance on reading as Frederick Douglass did. Instead, they appear to place less importance on reading.
The fact that Frederick Douglass (1817–1895) was able to learn how to read and write during a time when it was against the law for slaves to do so is something that has always caught my attention. The first step in his personal literacy program was to read "The Columbian Orator" by Frederick Douglass, which was an intriguing experience altogether. Reading and writing are made simpler for children and adolescents through the use of online learning, as seen in Rich's story. It is a skill that will serve children well in the modern digital world, and the ability to read online has many advantages. Some of these advantages include the ability to find information quickly and accurately, as well as the ability to find evidence to support one's claims across a variety of websites (Rich, 1970). On the other hand, there are a lot of people who believe that students' falling scores on standardized reading tests are due to the fact that they use the internet too much (Rich, 1970). When compared to the time period in which Frederick Douglass lived, the value of reading has decreased for today's youth. This is due to the fact that many people in his day were unable to read or write online. Last but not least, I've come to the conclusion that the youth of today do not place a high value on one's ability to read and write. According to the narrative's conclusion, "Like Nadia, who might otherwise spend most of her time watching television, to read and write." Plus, they would rather learn to read and write through the internet. If other children and teenagers were forced to go through what Fredrick Douglass did when he was a child, I believe they would have a greater appreciation for the circumstances they are currently in. In light of the fact that no two people's upbringings are exactly the same, it is of the utmost importance that we cultivate an appreciation for the things that we have and not take them for granted, as we can never be certain when they will be taken away from us.