Dissertation topic

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What part of "the effects of malware and phishing in health information safety and security in healthcare facilities" has not been researched and what is unique about your study. Are you only focusing on information "patients reveal to physicians on their health history"?

"your references are not peer-reviewed sources, so you cannot use them as the main source to justify your study." Do not use a blog entry (Agari) to justify your research