Discussion reply.

As you provide feedback to your classmates, you should respond to the following:

•   Is the paragraph clearly written? Does it flow well according to the given-new contract?
 •   Are there any sentences that do not follow the given-new contract? If so, which ones?
 •   Do you have any suggestions for revisions that would make the paragraph stronger? If so, what are they? 

 If you think that you are now ready to move into the trailer to begin start up procedures, there are a few things you may want to check before you begin the next steps of this process. You will need to retrace your steps on the outside of the vehicle. Validate all slide outs are locked in place, the floor is secure in the up position, the trailer is level, all power is on, and the stairs are securely fastened under the doors in the back of the slide outs on both sides. After these checks are complete, ensure the rear doors of the trailer, where the stairs are stored, are closed, doors on the generator are closed, and the extension pigtail cable is placed back into its proper place. At this point you are now ready to continue to the inside of the trailer for the interior start up procedures. These will include, the apache simulator, oculus rift, career navigators, and the M9 laser shot shooting range.