Discussion reply.

As you provide feedback to your classmates, you should respond to the following:

•   Is the paragraph clearly written? Does it flow well according to the given-new contract?
•   Are there any sentences that do not follow the given-new contract? If so, which ones?
•   Do you have any suggestions for revisions that would make the paragraph stronger? If so, what are they? 

Below is the third paragraph from my essay.

While to you start conducting the technical inspection portion of the maintenance work, keep in mind to start from the beginning of the task to the end.  If needed, refer to your notes or printed off work package. Be sure to physically touch the work completed in order to know lines are tight, nuts are torqued, wires are secure, and cotter pins are correctly installed. As you are inspecting imagine you are the maintainer completing the work. How would you go about completing the task? How would you fit that replacement part in? What tricks or tips have you learned and used completing the same task? After you have inspected the work, conduct a Foreign Object Debris check, just as you would and have been as a maintainer. It never hurts to have a second set of eyes checking for debris that could possible bring down that aircraft.