Diagnostic essay revision

Revisit your diagnostic essay (I've provided the link from Module 1)  for revising and editing,  Your revised copy should be an improvement of the original, and you should go beyond merely correcting the errors I have marked. You should strive for an increased word count as well as improved vocabulary and grammar.  

This assignment is an opportunity for you to demonstrate your revising and editing skills in an effort for a higher grade.  

Note:   I will compare the original to your revised copy.

Your essay for this module MUST be an improvement from the original written at the beginning of the semester. Receiving a higher grade is not automatic.  You must demonstrate editing and revising skills.