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 Thank you for the effort you put into this assessment. Your analysis demonstrates a solid understanding of diversity, equity, and inclusion (DEI), highlighting the significance of recognizing unconscious bias and microaggressions in healthcare. You did an excellent job presenting your insights and reflections on DEI and ethics. Additionally, you did not find two academic peer-reviewed journal articles published within the last 3–5 years that supported your main points and conclusions. Please refer to the highlighted sections in the body of your paper and the comments in the scoring guide for further feedback. If you decide to resubmit this assessment, please highlight all your changes so I can quickly identify your revisions.

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Representation of intensivists’ race/ethnicity, sex, and age by artificial intelligence: a cross- sectional study of two text-to-image models

Criterion Describe the evolution of DEI in healthcare and how it is continuing to influence patient care.

Your Result:DISTINGUISHED Describes the evolution of DEI in healthcare and how it is continuing to influence patient care, providing applicable examples.

Faculty Comments:Submission is not in a Word Document. I need to have the Turnitin

Score to grade the assessment. 3/24/2025 You provided a good description of the

evolution of DEI in healthcare and how it continues to influence patient care, giving

applicable examples. I like your example of the Civil Rights Act and the ACA. Show all Performance Ratings Criterion Explain how unconscious bias leads to microaggressions.

Your Result:DISTINGUISHED Explains how unconscious bias leads to microaggressions, providing applicable examples.

Faculty Comments:Submission is not in a Word Document. I need to have the Turnitin

Score to grade the assessment. 3/24/2025 You clearly explained how unconscious bias

leads to microaggressions. I appreciate your example of unintended behavior. Show all Performance Ratings Criterion Describe strategies for overcoming bias in healthcare and how they can continue to shape DEI practices in the future.

Your Result:DISTINGUISHED Describes strategies for overcoming bias in healthcare and how they can continue to shape DEI practices in the future, including providing suggestions for successful implementation.

Describes strategies for overcoming bias in healthcare and how they can continue to shape DEI practices in the future, including providing suggestions for successful implementation.

Faculty Comments:Submission is not in a Word Document. I need to have the Turnitin

Score to grade the assessment. 3/24/2025 I appreciate the strategies you outlined for

overcoming bias in healthcare and how they can shape future DEI practices. You also

made recommendations for the successful implementation of mentorship and support

networks. You did a great job supporting your ideas with scholarly, peer-reviewed

journal articles. Please make sure all articles are from the CU Library. Show all Performance Ratings Criterion Explain how DEI in healthcare results in improved health outcomes and increased patient satisfaction.

Your Result:PROFICIENT Explains how DEI in healthcare results in improved health outcomes and increased patient satisfaction.

Faculty Comments:Submission is not in a Word Document. I need to have the Turnitin

Score to grade the assessment. 3/24/2025 You explained how DEI in healthcare improves

health outcomes and increases patient satisfaction. For a higher score, support all your

ideas with peer-reviewed journal articles from the CU library. Show all Performance Ratings

Competency 5 Write for a specific audience, in an appropriate tone and style, in accordance with Capella writing standards. Criterion Produce text with minimal grammatical, usage, spelling, and mechanical errors.

Your Result:PROFICIENT Produces text with minimal grammatical, usage, spelling, and mechanical errors.

Faculty Comments:Submission is not in a Word Document. I need to have the Turnitin

Score to grade the assessment. 3/24/2025 I felt that your content was clear and logical.

There were minimal grammatical, spelling, and/or mechanical errors. I recommend

reviewing Capella’s writing center resources for a higher performance score. The link is

here: https://campus.capella.edu/web/writing-center/grammar/punctuation. Additionally,

you may wish to check out the learner success lab for additional writing resources:

https://campus.capella.edu/school-of-nursing-and-healthsciences/nhs-learner-success-lab.

Make sure your paragraphs have at least four sentences. Show all Performance Ratings

Show all Performance Ratings Criterion Integrate into text appropriate use of scholarly sources, evidence, and citation style.

Your Result:NON-PERFORMANCE Does not integrate into text appropriate use of scholarly sources, evidence, and citation style.

Faculty Comments:Submission is not in a Word Document. I need to have the Turnitin

Score to grade the assessment. 3/24/2025 Integrating information from scholarly

references into your writing can be challenging. Continue to work on how to write in an

academic voice, cite references to support your work, and use APA format and style. I

hope you will use the Capella writing center to help you with this: https://academicwriter-

apa-org.library.capella.edu. You may also wish to check out the learner success lab for

additional writing resources: https://campus.capella.edu/school-of-nursing-and-health-

sciences/nhs-learner-success-lab ****The references do not have active DOI or URLs to

open each article as required by APA 7th ed. Two of your articles do not exist at all.

Where did you get these references from? Show all Performance Ratings