comparative essay Great Britain & Mughal empires

I appreciate the submission. Unfortunately, I do not think you understood the instructions. This was to be a comparative essay that compared elements of a western and a non-western empire. You provided some great details about the British empire. The second part of the paper was to compare this approach to a non-western empire, such as the Mongol or Mughal empires.

If you can edit this paper and include the required elements, as well as bring in appropriate sources, both primary and secondary (as we have discussed, encyclopedia articles and BBC websites are not scholarly secondary sources), I will accept a resubmission by Wednesday without penalty.

Please let me know if you have any question and will be resubmitting.