CAN SOMEONE HELP WITH MY DISCUSSION?

 Revised my PowerPoint to correct what the instructor needs to be corrected; see feedback In this discussion:

• Write a 2–3 sentence summary of your potential research topic.
• Attach your revised presentation to your reply.

Good job creating an initial draft of your presentation.  Please see feedback embedded in your submission. Some additional feedback:1)    You now have content for each slide.  Think about how you can deliver the information concisely when you present it.2)    Work towards narrowing your problem of practice.  Can you be more specific? 3)   Use the Annotated Bibliography assignment this week to find evidence to support your problem.  I think you will find that there is ample literature about your topics to learn about.Next, you want to pivot and prepare your slides for presentation.  You will have the opportunity to present this at the 2nd Interactive Doctoral Workshop next week.  Think about how you can make the slides more visually appealing. Some tips:

• Minimize the text on each slide. You want your audience to focus on you and what you have to say, not to have to read slides.
• Continue to use keywords and bullet points on the slide, then put the content to support the slide into the Notes section. You can create an outline or script for what you will say for each slide in the Notes.
• Add additional images and pictures on yo