Business Law PP Paraphrasing and editing

I have a presentation around 1000-1500 words and it needs paraphrasing as well a little editing. The assignment it self achieved passing grade according to instructor feedback. I will attach the file needs paraphrasing and editing as well as the presentation brief in which you will find What the scenario of the presentation is and what is required to achieve passing grade(P4,P5)

Make sure to include a little speaker notes when necessary please.