Business Finance - Management Business Management Management ASSIGNMENT (APA, NO PLAGARISM, GREAT WORK, ON TIME)

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· 254.857.0478 • xxx.xxx.xxxx • [email protected] • 1417 Gruene Dr. Many, TX, 71103

Objective

CBDU-10295840-18-MTH, Construction Control Representative

Work Experience

VA North Texas Health Care System | 4500 S. Lancaster Rd. Dallas, T July 2013 - Present

Safety and Occupational Health Specialist

Conducts Safety and Occupational Health surveys at Veteran Affairs Health Care Systems to include VA Contract Nursing Homes, Medical Foster Care, Community Based Outpatient Clinics, Community Residential Care Homes and Adult Day Cares. Recommend measures to eliminate or control hazardous practices and

conditions which may cause mishaps. Prepared supplemental written safety procedures for application to local organizational components. Safety Specialist skilled in preparing, presenting fire protection, prevention and safety material for training purposes. Environment of Care Specialist responsible for assisting with local implementation of the Joint Commission environment of care program. Provided a safe, functional supportive and effective environment for staff, patients and contractors in the hospital. Managed fire extinguisher, sprinkler and kitchen suppression system inspections. Coordinated deficiency reports and corrective actions with engineering service.

Major duties include, but are not limited to:

· Creates layered and comprehensive approaches to identifying safety risks and preventing accidents before they happen within our construction safety round program;

· Develops a culture of safety where construction activities are occurring;

· Assumes lead role in the development of construction safety goals, policy, and procedural documentation;

· Applies safety science, industrial hygiene principles, engineering principles, practical concepts, and

processes to maintain a safe and healthy worksite for staff, volunteers, visitors, contractors and the general public during construction and renovation-related activities;

· Performs risk assessments and work closely with architects and engineers to identify, mitigate, and prevent unsafe work conditions;

· Performs pre-construction risk assessments, review of contractor submittal and Interim Life Safety assessments.

Facilities Engineering Acquisition Department | 1215 Depot Ave Forney, TX 76 July 2011 - July 2013

Construction Control Representative

Construction Control Representative responsible for developing scopes of work, cost estimates and contract documents for construction that are clearly written and complete.

· Responsible for developing and maintaining current and accurate specifications for service, repair, and maintenance construction contracts at Naval Facilities Engineering Command estimated at $10 million.

· Reviewed project plans and specifications prior to contract advertisement to determine practicability from a construction standpoint, whether physical obstructions or other construction difficulties have been anticipated, and whether materials specified are readily available.

· Knowledge of and experience in Construction Project Management.

· Attended pre-bid and pre-construction conferences to inform contractor of requirements concerning construction scheduling, progress reporting, safety measures, wage and hour law observance, labor relations, and payroll records; and supervised site surveys, set stakes to mark pertinent features, and investigate foundation.

· Serve as Contracting Officers Technical Representative (COTR) on various contracts. Current U.S. Government Secret Security Clearance.

· Prepared Performance Work Statements (PWS) using Naval Facilities Engineering Command's Facility Support Contracts(FSC) Templates.

Education

American Military University | Charles Town, WV, 25414

Master of Business Administration, MBA

GPA 3.30

University of Maryland University College | Adelphia, MD, 20783

Bachelor's of Science in Business Management Studies

GPA 2.90

University of Maryland University College | Adelphia, MD, 20783

Associate's of Arts in Business Management

GPA 2.89

John Dovonvan High School | New Orleans, LA, 78908

Diploma

Job Related Training

· 9209 OSHA Construction Focus

· 03/05 Navy Construction Inspector, Enlisted Classification-5501

· 9228 OSHA Confined Space

· 9147 OSHA Control of Hazardous Energy

· 9251 OSHA Asbestos

· 9138 OSHA Walking/ Working Surfaces

· 9342 OSHA Accident Investigation

· 07/12 Naval Facilities Engineering 40 Hour Contract Safety Hazard Awareness Certification

· 07/12 Occupational Safety and Health Administration 30Hr Safety Course

· 07/05 Naval Occupational Safety and Health (ASHORE)

· 03/12 Naval Facilities Engineering Command (NAVFAC) Writing Statement of Work

Other Information

· 05/18 Lake High School Varsity Football Representative

· 01/18 Concord Church Men's Ministry

May 2026

May 2006

August 2004

May 1991

RESUME PEER REVIEW

Introduction

The peer review critiques your resume as if a potential employer has received it for employment opportunities. The grading criteria is focused on job relevance, formatting, effectiveness, language, as well as education and training, which your resume provides well, showing experience in prior construction work as well as Health Care, expressing familiarity with compliance and inspections and a clear background in safety management.

Summary of Review Criteria and Research

Five areas of criteria were utilized in evaluating your resume, which are job relevance and targeting, formatting and readability, effectiveness given the objective, language used and education and certifications. These criteria were taken into consideration from Indeed.com, which is one of the nation’s largest hiring and employment websites that both large and small businesses utilize to attract top talent, and what job seekers utilize to find relevant job opportunities for themselves. Additionally, Harvard career guidance helped formulate the criteria with emphasis on tailoring the document, using action verbs and focusing on accomplishments other than responsibilities.

Review of Resume

REVIEW CRITERIA	REVIEW COMMENTS (PRO & CON)
1. Job relevance and targeting	The resume is clearly targeting safety and contract oversight work, which is one of the greatest strengths of the resume overall, as it aligns perfectly to the target objective. This is extremely helpful if you are targeting one specific dream job type situation or have a very specific job that you are trying to obtain. That being said, the objective shows the target job, but also provide a statement about the overall value you are bringing to the table, showing off your experience in construction safety, federal facility support, and compliance also.
2. Formatting and Readability	Your resume contains the primary portions that employers have come to expect, aiding in the document feeling complete and more acceptable, but, the formatting itself could be improved upon. There is an unneeded gap between your first work experience and the major duties that are included. This format does not happen again under the Construction Control Representative role, which detracts from consistency and maybe adds confusion and speculation. Under Education, perhaps consider moving the dates of your degrees underneath their data entry, as the space gapping may make your resume harder to scan quickly (Indeed, 2025.) Remember, most recruiters spend 10-15 seconds checking each resume towards a position, if that.
3. Summary and objective effectiveness	The objective identifies a target position, which helps translate your direct intent and position and reason for applying. What could be done differently here is also providing a comprehensive professional summary, which aids in employers helping to comprehend who you exactly are in terms of what you bring to the table for their company as well as years of experience and any certs or clearances that you might hold right off the bat (Indeed, 2025). This helps recruiters skim and see immediately what they are targeting for a solid hire, which presents even more opportunity for your resume to not be overlooked.
4. Experience and accomplishment language	The experience expressed in the resume remains extremely on target, clearly showing expertise in the subject matters of safety, risk, oversight, review and development of policy, which are incredibly effective for the present role which you are pursuing. One area of improvement that could be taken into consideration here is how the information itself is communicated. Phrases that introduce with “responsible for” and “major duties include” could become more assertive if instead they used strong action verbs that show achievable outcomes, as suggested by Harvard’s Division of Continuing Education (2025), the Indeed Editorial Team (2025) and Harvard Faculty of Arts and Sciences Mignone Center for Career Success, (n.d.). You are potentially missing a great opportunity to reflect achievements in your work bullets that create a very persuasive impact in your experience history, as opposed to just citing off what your cut and dry work responsibilities were.
5. Training, Education and Supporting Qualifications	The extensive OSHA and NAVFAC related education and training are extremely helpful here for the role you are targeting and present a clear edge above your applicant competition and peers. The Secret clearance being presented also is the perfect way to shine because it is a certification that gives you that competitive edge when it comes to meaningful contractor and federal roles. The improvement which could be presented here is in the education and training sections, which could be presented more consistently and clearly, especially with the dates, by narrowing the gap which recruiters and hiring managers would need to line them up to your degrees, cutting down their eye skimming time (Indeed, 2025). This is a very slight improvement, but the less time anyone reading your resume has to spend, the better. Another would be considered renaming “Other Information” to something more impactful like “Community Involvement” or “Volunteering Efforts” to show that you are a well-rounded professional who actively participates in the community and serves the community at large in a positive and professional manner.

Conclusion

All in all, the strong experience and alignment with construction safety is demonstrated very effectively in your resume. The field and target position which you are applying for is a direct matchup with the content that is presented inside the resume. Your resume will make an even bigger and better impression as well as leave a lasting impact with recruiting and hiring managers if slight revisions to accomplishment focused bullets are made, minor revisions to formatting, specifically to the education dates are included, and inserting a strong professional summary at the beginning also. The experience in the resume is fantastic, the main improvements that could be made is how that experience could be better communicated on the page. Great job!

References

Harvard Division of Continuing Education. (2025, November 18). How to write a great resume and cover letter. Harvard Extension School. https://extension.harvard.edu/blog/how-to-write-a-great-resume-and-cover-letter/

Harvard Faculty of Arts and Sciences Mignone Center for Career Success. (n.d.). Create a strong resume. Harvard University. https://careerservices.fas.harvard.edu/resources/create-a-strong-resume/

Indeed Editorial Team. (2025, December 11). Resume critique: Definition and tips. Indeed. https://www.indeed.com/career-advice/resumes-cover-letters/resume-critique