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IllustrationEssaymidterm.docx
Illustration_Essay_Outline.docx
IllustrationEssaymidterm.docx
Illustration Essay: Midterm Exam
Illustration Essay Instructions
Using the same topic you chose for the Outline in Week 3, write your Illustration essay of no fewer than 500 words.
1. Type of essay: Illustration
2. Topics: must be the same you chose for the outline
1. How does computer technology benefit the healthcare industry?
2. What advantages does online learning offer to college students?
3. In what ways does music affect human mood and emotional states?
4. Can a vegan diet serve as an effective approach to improving health?
5. Are streaming platforms like Netflix, Max, and Peacock leading to the decline of traditional cable television?
3. Failure to use the same topic you chose for your Outline will result in a zero (0) as your grade for this assignment.
4. The essay must have five (5) paragraphs and no fewer than 500 words.
5. Format: MLA 9th edition (Times New Roman, 12 pt)
6. The Thesis Statement must be the same you submitted in the Outline, must be placed at the end of the introductory paragraph, and must contain the three (3) subpoints that will be developed in paragraphs 2, 3, and 4.
E.g. Social media improves children's literacy , writing , and reading abilities .
(subpoint 1) (subpoint 2) (subpoint 3)
7. Documentation: You must use at least three (3) sources from reliable databases to document the information provided. Google Scholar and ProQuest Central in LIRN are highly recommended.
*To access LIRN through the Florida National University Blackboard, follow these steps:
1. Go to www.fnu.blackboard.com
2. Enter your Blackboard username and password
3. On the left side menu, click on Tools
4. Under Tools, click on LIRN System Tool
8. There must be at least one in-text citation in each of the body paragraphs (2, 3, and 4).
*Do NOT use Wikipedia, Infoplease, Answers.com, WebMd, Psychology Today as a source.
9. Similarity (Originality Report): Up to 25% of similarity will be accepted with no penalty. One (1) point will be deducted for each percentage above 25%.
10. AI Usage: Up to 20% of AI generated material will be accepted with no penalty. One (1) point will be deducted for each percentage above 20%. *Remember that Turnitin detects papers generated using AI, including translators.
11. Do NOT include tables, lists, bullet points, and graphs in your paper. Be sure to edit/proofread your work before submitting it.
12. Please, attach your essay by clicking on the Attachment Icon (Paperclip symbol). DO NOT copy and paste your submission or attach it as an external link or document.
13. Failure to follow any of the above instructions will negatively affect the grade for the essay.
14. You must use the MLA format exactly as it is; otherwise, you will lose points automatically as per the rubric.
Illustration_Essay_Outline.docx
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How Computer Technology Benefits the Healthcare Industry
I. Introduction
Hook: Computers now part of practically every clinical engagement, from bedside charting to video visits at home
Quick background: move from paper charts to electronic systems during last two decades; electronic devices now employed for record-keeping, diagnosis, communication and monitoring
Thesis Statement: Computer technology aids the healthcare business by improving the accuracy of clinical documentation and diagnosis, increasing patient access through telehealth and digital communication, and boosting safety through data-driven monitoring and decision support.
II. Body
1. Body Paragraph One
a. Topic Sentence: Computer systems improve the accuracy of clinical documentation and diagnosis by replacing handwritten records with structured electronic data and advanced imaging tools.
b. Support: electronic health records (EHRs) and fewer missing, illegible, or incomplete notes
c. Support: computer-aided imaging and laboratory systems for earlier, more consistent detection of disease
d. Support (examples / evidence):
- Key points: standardized chart templates; shared medication and allergy lists; digital X-ray, CT, and MRI analysis
- Example: EHR alert that blocks a prescription until allergy and medication fields are complete
- Example: radiology software that flags suspicious findings on a mammogram or chest scan
- Evidence to use later: research linking EHR use to fewer documentation errors and faster retrieval of prior test results
2. Body Paragraph Two
a. Topic Sentence: Computer technology expands access to care by connecting patients and clinicians through telehealth platforms, patient portals, and remote communication tools.
b. Support: video visits and remote monitoring for patients who live far from clinics or cannot travel easily
c. Support: secure messaging and portals for results, refill requests, and questions outside office hours
d. Support (examples / evidence):
- Key points: virtual primary-care and specialty visits; home blood-pressure and glucose devices that send data to the clinic; after-hours portal messages
- Example: hypertension or diabetes follow-up completed by video instead of a missed in-person appointment
- Example: patient portal that posts lab results and education materials the same day they are released
- Evidence to use later: rapid growth of telehealth during and after the COVID-19 pandemic as proof that digital access can keep care continuous
3. Body Paragraph Three
a. Topic Sentence: Computer technology strengthens patient safety by using real-time data, alerts, and decision-support tools to prevent errors and catch problems early.
b. Support: clinical decision-support alerts for drug interactions, duplicate orders, and abnormal vital signs
c. Support: barcode scanning and computerized order entry to reduce medication mix-ups at the bedside
d. Support (examples / evidence):
- Key points: allergy and interaction warnings; barcode medication administration; early-warning scores based on vital signs
- Example: pharmacy alert that stops a penicillin order for a patient with a documented allergy
- Example: scanning of the patient wristband and the medication package before each dose
- Evidence to use later: hospital data showing fewer adverse drug events after computerized order entry and barcode systems are adopted
III. Conclusion
a. Restate thesis: Computer technology benefits healthcare by making documentation and diagnosis more accurate, bringing care to patients through digital access, and protecting safety with data and alerts.
b. Summarize main points: EHRs and imaging reduce record and diagnostic errors; telehealth and portals remove distance and time barriers; decision support and barcode systems catch dangerous mistakes before they reach the patient.
c. Final thought: future investment should include both better software and staff training so that technology serves patients instead of slowing the people who care for them
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