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ArgumentativeResearchEssayAssignment.pdf
Dr. Tarkan-Blanco
Argumentative Research Paper
Directions: You will write an academic paper arguing your position on the topic from your
research proposal and follow the classical argument format (adapted from Simon & Schuster)
below.
Your purpose will be to convince your audience to change their beliefs or persuade them to take
action. You will use at least five academic sources (i.e., scholarly and edited publications) to
support your thesis statement. You may not use Wikipedia. As for web sources, only websites
ending in .edu, .org., and .gov are acceptable. Your paper needs to be a minimum of four-
pages-long, double-spaced, and in APA or MLA format. The works cited page or list of
references does not count towards the page requirement.
Classical Argument Format
I. Introductory paragraph with a thesis statement at the end
The opening paragraph of your essay needs to set the stage for the position you will
argue and gain the reader’s interest. To achieve these goals, use one of the following
strategies:
• Relate a brief interesting story or anecdote
• Give one or more pertinent—perhaps surprising—statistics
• Use an appropriate quotation
• Define a key term
• Present one or more brief examples
Whichever introductory method you use, make sure that it smoothly leads into your
argumentative thesis statement (also called a claim) that clearly presents the topic to
be debated in the essay and states the writer’s opinion regarding that topic.
Topic + claim = Argumentative thesis statement
Sample argumentative thesis sentences:
People should not be allowed to own wild animals.
Consumers should purchase organic foods to achieve health benefits and improve the
quality of environment.
II. Body paragraph(s): background information
The background paragraph gives readers the basic information they need for
understanding your claim and its support. It might include definitions of key terms,
historical or social context, prior scholarship, and other related material.
Note: You can include this as part of your introductory paragraph, or it can appear in
its own paragraph immediately after the introduction.
III. Body paragraphs: reasons and evidence to support your claim
The body paragraphs need to support the position you are arguing on the topic. This
the core of the essay. Each reason and piece of evidence usually consists of a general
statement (topic sentence) that presents an aspect of your argument, backed up with
relevant details, including examples and information from scholarly publications.
Depending on the length of the essay, you might devote one or two paragraphs to
each reason or type of evidence. If a reason is very complicated, use two paragraphs
divided at a logical point. For organization, you might choose to present the most
important point first, saving the least important for last.
IV. Body paragraph(s): response to opposing position (rebuttal)
This section of your essay needs to mention and defend against an opposite point of
view. State reasons that someone might use to argue against your position. Answer
these criticisms by explaining why your position is stronger.
This refutation, which can be lengthy or brief according to the overall length of the
essay, appears in its own paragraph or paragraphs, immediately before the
concluding paragraph. Start each body paragraph with a topic sentence that helps
your readers follow your line of reasoning.
Guidelines for handling opposing arguments:
• Examine the evidence for each opposing argument, looking for missing or
contradictory facts. The following questions might help you with your
analysis:
Is the evidence sufficient?
Is the evidence relevant?
Is the evidence accurate?
Questions such as these will help you identify logical fallacies (such as hasty
generalizations, irrelevant arguments, etc.) in your opponent’s claim.
• Demonstrate that an opposing argument depends on emotion rather than
reasoning
• Explain the negative consequences of the opposing position.
• Explain that the costs of the other position are not worth the benefits.
Sentence and paragraph guides for rebuttal paragraphs:
• I understand that my opponents believe ___________. I respect their
reasoning that ___________ and also that ____________. In fact, what we
have in common is ______________.
• Some people might oppose my position by arguing that _________. They
might explain that _________, and they might point to support such as
_________. However, this argument fails to take into account ___________.
Furthermore, evidence from researchers X and Y suggests a different
conclusion, namely _____________. Ultimately, this opposing argument is
unconvincing because ______________.
V. Conclusion
The final paragraph needs to wrap up the essay, summarizing the main points of
your argument. Be sure to indirectly refer back to your thesis statement by
summarizing your point of view. Present the argument’s significance, or call to
action, or use one of the following strategies:
• Use a statement that urges awareness by the readers
• Use a statement that looks ahead to the future
Note: Do not introduce new ideas or facts that belong in the body of your essay.
Also, do not reword your introduction.
AddressingWorkplaceSafetyConcernsatXYZManufacturing1corrected1.docx
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Addressing Workplace Safety Concerns at XYZ Manufacturing
Student Name
Institution
Addressing Workplace Safety Concerns at XYZ Manufacturing
Abstract:
This paper discusses a significant workplace problem at XYZ Manufacturing, focusing on safety concerns within the facility. It delves into the causes and consequences of these issues, describes efforts made to bring them to the attention of authorities, assesses the resolution status, and offers a comprehensive solution to address the persisting problems.
1. Introduction
Workplace safety is a fundamental concern that directly impacts the well-being of employees and the overall productivity of an organization. XYZ Manufacturing, a well-established company in the community, has been grappling with serious safety issues within its production facility (Schulte, 2020). According to a friend working in the company raised much need to address the safety concerns because it poses threat to human health and safety. This paper aims to shed light on the causes, consequences, actions taken, and proposed solutions for these problems, emphasizing the importance of rectifying them.
1.1 Problem Description
The primary issue at XYZ Manufacturing revolves around workplace safety. The causes of this problem are multifaceted. Inadequate safety protocols, a lack of comprehensive training, and outdated safety equipment contribute to an environment that places employees at risk. Consequences of this problem include workplace accidents, injuries, increased worker compensation claims, and a demoralized workforce. Financially, the company faces increased insurance costs and potential legal liabilities. Psychologically, employees suffer from anxiety and fear due to unsafe working conditions.
2. Efforts to Bring the Problem to Authorities' Attention
My friend working in XYZ Manufacturing has made efforts to address this problem by concerned employees. An email was sent to the company's management, highlighting the critical nature of the safety concerns and urging immediate action. My friend’s email reads like this:
Subject: Urgent Action Required: Addressing Workplace Safety Concerns
Dear Management Team,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing on behalf of a group of concerned employees at XYZ Manufacturing to bring to your attention some significant safety concerns that require immediate action. As dedicated members of the XYZ team, we believe that addressing these issues is paramount to ensuring the well-being of all employees and the continued success of our organization.
Problem Description:
The primary concern revolves around workplace safety. Our facility has experienced a series of incidents and near-miss accidents that have raised serious red flags. These incidents are directly related to several ongoing safety issues that need your urgent attention. The causes of these problems include inadequate safety protocols, a lack of comprehensive training, and outdated safety equipment.
Consequences and Ramifications:
The consequences of these safety issues are profound. Employees have been injured, resulting in increased worker compensation claims. Our financial situation is being adversely affected by rising insurance costs, and there is potential for legal liabilities if these issues persist. Moreover, the psychological impact on our employees is significant, as they work in an environment filled with anxiety and fear due to unsafe working conditions (Schulte, 2020).
Our Request:
We implore you to recognize the gravity of this situation and take immediate steps to rectify these safety concerns. The safety and well-being of our employees are non-negotiable, and we firmly believe that by addressing these issues proactively, we can safeguard our team and improve the overall workplace environment.
Immediate Actions Required:
Conduct a comprehensive safety audit to identify and rectify potential hazards.
Invest in updated safety equipment and technology to replace outdated machinery.
Implement a thorough safety training program, ensuring that all employees are well-versed in safety procedures and protocols.
Establish a systematic process for employees to report safety concerns anonymously to encourage accountability and safety consciousness.
Hold management accountable for workplace safety by implementing performance metrics tied to safety outcomes.
We appreciate your prompt attention to this matter and request that you schedule a meeting with representatives from our concerned employee group to discuss these safety concerns in detail. We are eager to collaborate with management to ensure a safer working environment for all employees.
Thank you for your immediate action on this pressing issue. We look forward to your response.
Sincerely,
FRIEND’S NAME
ROLE IN XYZ Manufacturing
3. Resolution Status
Following the submission of the email, the company took several measures to address the safety issues. These included the introduction of regular safety drills, an overhaul of outdated equipment, and a comprehensive safety training program. While these actions have mitigated some of the issues, the problem is not entirely resolved.
3.1 Remaining Issues
Despite the positive changes, XYZ Manufacturing still faces some residual safety concerns. There have been instances of near-miss accidents, and my friend and colleagues e report that certain areas of the facility require further safety enhancements (Schulte, 2020). For instance, the ventilation system in one section is subpar, and there are still older machines in operation that pose potential risks.
4. Proposed Solution
I believe that my friend should consider addressing the persisting safety concerns at XYZ Manufacturing by implementing the following measures:
4.1 Continuous Improvement
Regular safety audits and inspections should be carried out to identify and rectify potential hazards promptly. This would involve collaboration with the company's safety committee, composed of employees, to ensure that all areas are adequately assessed (Sorensen et al., 2018).
4.2 Updated Equipment and Technology
Invest in modern safety equipment and technology to replace outdated machinery and enhance overall workplace safety. This could include improved ventilation systems and the replacement of older machines with safer alternatives.
4.3 Ongoing Training
Maintain and expand the safety training program to ensure all employees are well-versed in safety procedures and protocols. This should include periodic refreshers and assessments.
4.4 Employee Feedback Mechanism
Establish a systematic process for employees to report safety concerns anonymously, fostering a culture of accountability and safety consciousness.
4.5 Management Accountability
Hold management accountable for workplace safety. Implement performance metrics that tie to safety outcomes, and reward managers for maintaining a safe working environment.
Conclusion
The workplace safety issues at XYZ Manufacturing are of paramount importance due to their adverse financial, psychological, and physical consequences. While some progress has been made in addressing these concerns, it is crucial to continue efforts to ensure a completely safe working environment (Sorensen et al., 2018). The proposed solution involves ongoing improvements in safety protocols, equipment, training, feedback mechanisms, and management accountability, all of which are essential to guarantee a secure workplace for all employees.
References
Schulte P. A. (2020). A global perspective on addressing occupational safety and health hazards in the future of work. La Medicina del lavoro, 111(3), 163–165. https://doi.org/10.23749/mdl.v111i3.9735
Sorensen, G., Sparer, E., Williams, J. A. R., Gundersen, D., Boden, L. I., Dennerlein, J. T., Hashimoto, D., Katz, J. N., McLellan, D. L., Okechukwu, C. A., Pronk, N. P., Revette, A., & Wagner, G. R. (2018). Measuring Best Practices for Workplace Safety, Health, and Well-Being: The Workplace Integrated Safety and Health Assessment. Journal of occupational and environmental medicine, 60(5), 430–439. https://doi.org/10.1097/JOM.0000000000001286
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