advanced biology/microbiology/immunology write up

I have a work in advanced biology

just one page addition + a lil editing

its a research write up

i will show files in message as its confidential 

now what I need is as follows

don't forget in text citation same as the ones as before i did  and my prof told me there are some words that i used that are not professional , so just make a fast reading to it and correct unprofessional words.

so there are two files 

(1) my write up where the prof wants me to add one page + remove unprofessonal words

(2) the article from where u need to extract one additional page without copying anything 

deadline is sharp 11 hrs