2nd draft

I already wrote a paper about The epic of gilgamesh, I have the comments that the professor wrote about the paper I just need someone to fix the paper, most important thing is to make sure that the thesis statement is clear my idea of the thesis is that I want to say that giglamesh was cruel and not a good king for his people but when he became friends with Enkidu his personality changed and after Enkidu died gilgamesh changed his personality and became a good king I need this to be the thesis but write it in a good way and make it clear and understandable also if you think that the thesis doesnt relate to the content I wrote in the paper feel free to change it just make sure I get an A in the paper. I will provide my paper and the book so you could change the quotes because the professor doesnt like them. and please check for grammar mistakes make sure the paper is perfect.