10 page psychology paper

I will attach my professor’s comments on the work that you did. The introduction has to be a lot longer maybe like 3 page. You must be willing to edit any revisions my professor gives me in the future and now. I will attach and example of how the paper should look like. You have to cite a lot more my professer said. A proposal is a question so the title should be a questions too.  The paper has to have at least 8 sources and the sources has to be from the same database that I got the sources that I gave you before. Below I have an example of how the prop should look like and then I provided pictures of my teachers feedback.