1. Revised essay 2. Write 200 word response

1.Correct your essay, based on suggestions received from Smarthinking. Fill in any information it asks for, and in moments, you will receive suggested corrections. 

2. In  200-300  words, using multiple paragraphs, describe the response you received from this free electronic-review service(smartthinkin). Were you surprised by this review? Additionally, tell why (or why not) you will use this service in the future. What are the benefits of careful proofreading and an outside review? Be sure to cite and reference as appropriate.