Ashley Allen
Southern New Hampshire University
ENG 123
October 18, 2022
Module 2.5 Assignment: Writing Notes
In my article, I will debate whether or not women should work and whether or not
anxiety and sadness are choices or mental illnesses. I've struggled with anxiety and depression,
and I'm a woman who wants to work in accounting, therefore those are the reasons I've chosen
these arguments. The debate is relevant to me obtaining my accounting degree by demonstrating
how closely I relate to both and the challenges I will face along the road. The majority of my
readership is female. I'm seeking for a change and want to make you feel better with my essay.
demonstrating to them that they are not alone and that it is okay to encounter some obstacles
along the path. Among the difficulties would be dealing with someone who believes that I
choose to experience anxiety and sadness, making them question whether I'm basically making
explanations. Additionally, it will be challenging to change the minds of those who still think
that women have no business working. In general, I'm just attempting to explain why, as a
woman, I should be permitted to work among males and that my health difficulties won't stand in
the way of my ambitions. It is my intention to reassure readers who find themselves in a similar
situation by letting them know they are not the only ones dealing with these difficulties. giving
them justifications and supported justifications wherefore. My thesis has to include strong topic
sentences, a consistent framework, and a suitable mood, among other things. Additionally, it has
supplementary information. Perhaps one my references for my essay will be an online article by
Joel Garfinkle titled "Three Ways of Recognizing Women As Business Leaders For Greater
Profits." His paper not only deconstructs the data but also offers persuasive arguments for why
women are equally competent in the job as males. My second source will be more focused on the
essay's section on anxiety and despair. This source is an article from Project Helping titled
"Depression and Anxiety." This site truly delves into the impact of the diseases on people's daily
activities. I'm going to use quotations, summaries, and paraphrases to include both sources into
my article.
