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I have addressed some points below regarding your submitted research work.
Strengths
• The topic has been chosen very well and you discussed one of the
most important topics in the world, every year healthcare system has
paid much money in decreasing stressors in human life.
• The population of the study was chosen in an acceptable amount
• Table 1 described a demographic point very well and meet all APA
criteria.
• The cited papers were matched to your title.
Weaknesses
• The ratio between male and female was not good enough, because
male and female has completely different physiological response to
stressors.(Leistner & Menke, 2020)
• You didn’t mention what type of spirituality has been studied.
• Great job with the survey discussion for this week’s assignment. The first
strength of your assignment was well written and had excellent information
that corresponded with the results that you included within the assignment.
The second strength was that you incorporated clearly the table and figure
in your text. I was able to read and understand the information clearly. I felt
that the way you discussed the table and the figure within your paper was
easy to follow and was never confusing. However, one error that I found
was that I did not see what type of spirituality you were specifically
discussing. I would elaborate on the type of spirituality that you are
discussing in order to flow properly. The second error that I found was that
your reference page listed different fonts. I would double-check if the font
is the correct format (St. Peters, M., 2021). The third error was that the
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ratio between both men and women was not a strong conclusion because
men and women experience different levels of physiological responses
regarding stress. I would go a step further to discuss the difference to
enhance and strengthen this specific area.
• Reference
American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication manual of the American b b b
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b b b Psychological b Association (7th ed.). https://doi.org/10.1037/0000165-000
Harris, D. (2022). Discussion thread: M6 research project review. Research Methods
b b b and Statistics in Psychology II. Retrieved April 22, 2022, from
b b b b https://canvas.liberty.edu/courses/336469/discussion_topics/2028942?
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St. Peters, M. (2022). Correlation and Regression in SPSS. Research Methods and
b b b Statistics in Psychology II. Retrieved April 22, 2022, from
b b b b https://canvas.liberty.edu/courses/336469/modules
Leistner, C., & Menke, A. (2020). Hypothalamic-pituitary-adrenal axis and stress.
Handb Clin Neurol, 175, 55-64. https://doi.org/10.1016/B978-0-444-64123-6.00004-7
