d d d d d d d d d d d d d d d 1
In response your request for a peer review of your manuscript on the relationship between to
spirituality and loneliness, I have addressed what I believe to be two areas of strength and
three areas of potential improvement.
Strengths
1. The manuscript well-organized, cogent, and devoid of major formatting errors. is
The appropriate use of headings, spacing, table/figure formatting, and your
adherence the assignment instructions contribute overall ease of readability to to an
and demonstrate your commitment the proofing and revision to process.
2. The demographic data presented a meaningful way and the figure included is in
supports the understanding of that data. Furthermore, the variables of reader’s
interest are clearly stated, the hypothesis. The correct statistical analysis was as is
used and a decision regarding the null hypothesis stated concisely and is accurately.
