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After reviewing your result and discussion sections, I found that there were a few
areas of improvement needed, but also a few areas that you did an excellent job
with. Unfortunately, there are many areas that are going need to to be looked back
on and be changed slightly.Mainly making sure you up are going back reference to
the APA Manual will be helpful for any questions.
STRENGTHS:
- You provided proper information about your sample size and the demographic
variable.
- You also has a nice header set up, along with proper heading for each section.
WEAKNESSES:
