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After reviewing your result and discussion sections, I found that there were a
few areas of improvement needed, but also a few areas that you did an
excellent job with. Unfortunately, there are many areas that are going to need
to be looked back on and be changed up slightly.Mainly making sure you are
going back to reference the APA Manual will be helpful for any questions.
STRENGTHS:
- You provided proper information about your sample size and the demographic
variable.
- You also has a nice header set up, along with proper heading for each
section.
WEAKNESSES:
- Make sure you have Figure 1, Figure 2, Figure3, or Table 1, etc. labeled
above each one of your graphs or tables. There should also be a title about
each table or graph, along with a note at the bottom of each one to describe
what you are looking at in each table or graph (American Psychological
Association, 2020, p. 199, 215-216, 225).
- The intext citations that you currently have unfortunately are slightly wrong,
make sure that the author(s) name and date are in parenthesis (American
Psychological Association, 2020, p.).
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- Your graphs and tables seem to be copy and pasted directed from SPSS,
however, it is not in APA format. You can find this proper format presented by
Dr. Megan St. Peters (2022) in last week’s tutorial video (St. Peters, 2022).
REFERENCES
American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication Manual of the American
Psychological Association (7th ed.). https://doi.org/10.1037/0000165-000 Links
to an external site.
St. Peters, M. (2022). Scientific Writing: Results and Discussion. Research
Methods and
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