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Z07317-7AAVDM09 by Jue Chen

Submission dat e : 10- Jan- 2019 11:54 AM (UT C+0000) Submission ID: 9867 14 10 File name : Z 07 317 - 7 AAVDM09_24 7 2962_157 8311689.do c Word count : 54 23 Charact e r count : 30809

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Z07317-7AAVDM09 ORIGINALITY REPORT

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FINAL GRADE

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Z07317-7AAVDM09 GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

A Pro visio nal Grade is Awarded (NB subject to ratif icatio n at Scho o l Examinatio n Bo ard).

4 2%

O ve rall e valuat ion

T his is an essay that do es no t answer the scenario o r the assignment. T here is plenty o f interesting co ntent o f f ered but very little o f it is helpf ul o r relevant co ntent to answering the assignment. T here is no strategy o f f ered at all.

Are as of st re ngt h

Sectio n 1 was well suppo rted by cited reso urces and evidence. Ho wever the co verage and descriptive co ntent was strategically f o cussed upo n inf o rmatio n that wo uld no t be particularly usef ul o r pertinent to the scenario and thus this sectio n whilst f ull o f interesting co ntent was no t directive eno ugh to be f ully ef f ective.

T he wo rk is well written in go o d English and seems to exhibit academic skills in essay writing but the co ntent is rarely f o cussed upo n answering the scenario rather than summarising and repeating it.

Are as of improve me nt

Make mo re use o f the advantages that co me with the repo rt f o rmat, by sticking to an essay type f o rmat yo u gave up adding value thro ugh clearer signpo sting, mo re graphics/tables etc to present additio nal inf o rmatio n etc. Mo re headings and sub- headings signpo st strategies and ideas, bullets allo w f o r lists and tables and graphics allo w f o r mo re inf o rmatio n in co ndensed f o rms. T he wo rd co unt was very high as well and this illustrates the pro blems o f using the essay style when asked f o r a repo rt.

T he wo rk also repeated the scenario co ntent in

Sectio n 2 a lo t witho ut adding much o f value to it – at least 4 pages o f scenario inf o rmatio n repetitio n. Overall the pro se thro ugho ut was bo gged do wn with descriptio n when it co uld have been mo re analytical and precise and clear in its intent and strategic directio n.

T he f irst snif f o f strategy is at page 13 – lo ts o f wo rds bef o re this that didn’t answer the scenario and thus no t much co ntent to actually o f f er valuable co ntent. Ho wever what is there f ro m page 13 o nwards is still an essay o n ho w usef ul it is to have a digital strategy and marketing plan witho ut ever o f f ering o ne.

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Comment 1

T his part sho uld summarise the f indings and reco mmendatio ns - yo u did no t do that and thus this do es no t add value to the repo rt.

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