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· Your Cultural Autobiography was interesting! The point you made about your views and experiences being shaped by culture was poignant.

Please address the following:

Please reformat your Email to Supervisor. Currently it is written as an essay. This must be in the form of an email to Greg with an outline that expresses the importance of articulating cultural beliefs and biases. Greg’s Email in Project Resources and the Outline Skeleton in Skill-Building Resources will aid you in this process.

Move the section on Guatemalan Americans to that text box instead of being in the text box pertaining to Ghanaians and Ghanaian Americans on the Learning About Others Worksheet.

Explain how what you learned from doing the reading changed your view in text boxes 4-6 on the Learning About Others Worksheet. Reviewing the directions will help here.

Proofread your Learning About Others Worksheet for errors in writing. Try reading your answers out loud. Sometimes your ears can catch what your eyes cannot. You may wish to refer to the CfA Writing Guide.

Add in-text citations and a reference page to the Learning About Others Worksheet since sources were used for its completion. Please consult the CfA Citation Guide for information about using sources and citing your sources.

Please revise the items listed above and resubmit. You are off to a good start, Rebecca! I look forward to your next submission!