NO PLAGIARISM DUE TUESDAY JANUARY 22,2019 MY TOPIC IS GENDER INEQUALITY

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Paper Title: GENDER INEQUALITY

No. of Pages: 0 Pages

Paper Style: APA Paper Type: N/A

Taken English? Yes English as Second Language? No

Feedback Areas: General, N/A

Paper Goals: This is a rough draft before my final paper. I need to make sure that

I have a strong thesis and argument on Gender Inequality

Proofing Summary:

Hello Tamara

I’m Greg, your composition tutor for the Writing Center. I have reviewed your

submission and have several suggestions that will help you revise. Please feel free to

contact us through a live chat session with any follow-up questions or for any

clarification.

Below, you will find a revision plan along with margin comments within your paper. Use

my suggestions as a starting point for the revision process. Also, please note that I

have not edited or proofread the entire draft for minor errors, but rather, focused on

overall concerns such as idea development. For a complete look at your grammar and

punctuation, please use the Grammarly software available under “Writing Center” in

your classroom.

Strengths:

For your revisions, I suggest focusing on:

1. Thesis statement—For this assignment, it is important to have a thesis that states the

issue you are writing about, the solutions you propose for solving this issue and the

ethical implications of these solutions. Be sure to consider how multiple parts of society

will benefit from this solution.

2. Explaining/Developing Ideas—I suggest breaking the body of the paper up into four

different sections. The first part will address the problems associated with this issue.

Next, you will offer your solutions and explain why those will work. Keep in mind that

your paper should propose a solution to the problem, and provide evidence from

scholarly sources that your proposed solution is viable.

Good luck in the course, and I hope we can help you with your next assignment.

Greg

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End your introduction

with a thesis statement

that includes your

solution(s) to the

problem, as well as the

ethical outcome of that

solution.

As the citation connects

the reader to the full

source on the last page,

only author and publication

year are necessary. List

all three authors on first

reference, and follow

their names with

publication year in

parentheses.

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Be careful not to refer to

articles you are citing as

"the articles" or refer to an

author as "the author" or

by gender such as he or

she. Always use the APA

author/date method. So

instead of writing: the

author stated, the articles

stated, or he stated, use

the APA method: Jones

(2002) stated…

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When citing six or more

authors, use the first

author's name along

with et al. and publication

year for all references:

(Devine et al., 2012).

Et al. means “and others.”

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This is a very general

solution. Keep in mind

the assignment is

seeking your specific

solutions, as well as

evidence from your

research that those

solutions will work.

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