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Writing a Compare/Contrast Essay
As always, the instructor and the assignment sheet provide the definitive expectations and requirements for any essay. Here is some general information about the organization for this type of essay:
• A comparison essay notes either similarities, or similarities and differences.
• A contrast essay notes only differences.
• The comparison or contrast should make a point or serve a purpose. Often such essays do one of the following:
Clarify something unknown or not well understood.
Lead to a fresh insight or new way of viewing something.
Bring one or both of the subjects into sharper focus.
Show that one subject is better than the other.
• The thesis can present the subjects and indicate whether they will be compared, contrasted, or both.
• The same points should be discussed for both subjects; it is not necessary, however to give both subjects the same degree of development.
• Some common organizational structures include: (see note below)
Block method (subject by subject)
Point by point
Comparisons followed by contrasts (or the reverse)
• Use detailed topic sentences and the following connecting words to make the relationship between your subjects clear to your reader:
Connectors That Show Comparison (Similarities)
In additon Correspondingly Compared to
Similarly Just as As well as
Likewise Same as At the same time
Connectors That Show Contrast (Differences)
However On the contrary On the other hand
Even though In contrast Although
Unlike Conversely Meanwhile
See the other side of this page of a detailed example for both the Block Method and the Point- by-Point method. For a blank chart to organize your own essay, use the Compare/Contrast Essay Worksheet
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Writing a Compare/Contrast Essay
The following example contains an element of the author’s opinion, but not all compare/contrast assignments allow for that. Always check your assignment sheet and ask your instructor for clarificaion about including your opinion.
Point-by-Point Method Block Method
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• Introduction of general topic • Specific topic • Thesis = areas to be covered in this essay: Both
cats and dogs make excellent pets, but an appropriate choice depends on the pet owner’s lifestyle, finances, and household accommodations.
• Introduction of general topic • Specific topic • Thesis = areas to be covered in this essay: Both cats and dogs
make excellent pets, but an appropriate choice depends on the pet owner’s lifestyle, finances, and household accommodations.
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Topic Sentence - Aspect 1 Cats make less of an impact on an owner’s lifestyle. Topic 1 - Aspect 1: Cats
• Detail: Don’t have to be watched during the day
• Detail: Easier to get care if owner travels Topic 2 - Aspect 1: Dogs
• Detail: Pack animals shouldn’t be left alone • Detail: Harder to get care when away
Transition Sentence
Topic Sentence – Topic 1 Cats are easier and less expensive to care for. Aspect 1: Lifestyle
• Detail: Don’t have to be watched during the day • Detail: Easier to get care if owner travels
Aspect 2: Cost • Detail: Food and health care are usually less expensive • Detail: Less likely to cause property damage
Aspect 3: House accommodations • Detail: Don’t take up much space • Detail: Less intrusive
Transition Sentence
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Topic Sentence - Aspect 2 Cats are less expensive to own and care for. Topic 1 - Aspect 2: Cats
• Detail: Food and health care are usually less expensive
• Detail: Less likely to cause property damage Topic 2 - Aspect 2: Dogs
• Detail: Food is more expensive • Detail: Over-breeding causes some health
problems Transition Sentence
Topic Sentence – Topic 2 Dogs are active and loyally engaging pets. Aspect 1 – Lifestyle
• Detail: Pack animals shoudn’t be left alone • Detail: Harder to get care when away Need more living
space Aspect 2 – Cost
• Detail: Food is more expensive • Detail: Over-breeding causes some health problems
Aspect 3 – House accommodations • Detail: Often need yard and fence • Detail: Require more safety and protective measures
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Topic Sentence - Aspect 3 Cats need few special house accommodation. Topic 1 - Aspect 3: Cats
• Detail: Don’t take up much space • Detail: Less intrusive
Topic 2 - Aspect 3: Dogs • Detail: Often need yard and fence • Detail: Require more safety and protective
measures Transition Sentence
Optional: develop a paragraph to evaluate the comparison made in the essay: Last summer, I was considering adopting a pet, so I visited the SPCA to gather more information about cats and dogs. I am a full time student and work part time in the evenings, so my lifestyle and schedule didn’t seem conducive to owning a dog like I had originally planned. Now that I’ve had my cat Cookie for a few months, I see that she’s the perfect fit and a great companion for me.
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• Summary of main points • Evaluation and/or possible future developments • Significance of topic to author: When considering
adopting a pet, a prospective owner must consider the lifestyle, finances, and household accommodations that the pet would require. Owners who neglect to compare these aspects will often not care for their pet in a safe manner.
• Summary of main points • Evaluation and/or possible future developments • Significance of topic to author: When considering adopting a
pet, a prospective owner must consider the lifestyle, finances, and household accommodations that the pet would require. Owners who neglect to compare these aspects will often not care for their pet in a safe manner.
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1. Write each topic name above one of the circles. List attributes or qualities of that topic in the circle, placing any shared qualities in the overlapping section. Be specific and use details. (Example:details of living in SB might include high cost of living, beach community, good schools, etc. Less effective qualities: not nice place, cool hangouts.)
5. Use the chart on the next page to organize your paragraphs as indicated. Add more ideas and details for each category as you think of them.
After completing steps 1-3, list the three categories or aspects that both items share: 1. 2. 3.
Brainstorming for a Compare/Contrast Essay
2. Circle the most important qualities in each list and match at least three opposites from one circle to another. ________________________________________________ __________________________________________________
3. Review the lists and identify three categories or aspects that describe these details. (Example:” beach community” detail for one topic and “big city” detail for the other = environment or setting as a category.) List the categories in the box above.
4. Then choose one option (point by point or block method) to structure your essay. See examples in this handout.
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Compare and Contrast Essay Structure: Block Method
In the Block Method, each paragraph addresses ONE TOPIC ONLY from your pair of topics and includes the SHARED ASPECTS you have chosen to Compare to topic 2. Use the following chart to organize your ideas for your essay. (See Venn diagram steps 1 – 5 for examples on topics, aspects, and details.)
Block Method My Essay • Introduction
o introduction of general topic
o specific topic o areas to be
covered in this essay
• Topic 1 o Aspect 1
Detail Detail
o Aspect 2 Detail Detail
o Aspect 3 Detail Detail
Topic Sentence:
• Topic 2 o Aspect 1
Detail Detail
o Aspect 2 Detail Detail
o Aspect 3 Detail Detail
Topic Sentence:
• Conclusion o Summary of
main points o Evaluation
and/or possible future developments
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Compare and Contrast Essay Structure: Point by Point Method
In the Point-by-Point Method, each paragraph contains details on ONE ASPECT of BOTH TOPICS organized in the same order. Use the following chart to organize your ideas for your essay. (See Venn diagram steps 1 – 5 for examples on topics, aspects, and details.)
Point by Point Method My Essay o Introduction
o introduction of general topic
o specific topic
o areas to be covered in this essay
o Topic 1 - Aspect 1 Detail Detail
o Topic 2 - Aspect 1 Detail Detail
Topic Sentence:
o Topic 1 - Aspect 2 Detail Detail
o Topic 2 - Aspect 2 Detail Detail
Topic Sentence:
o Topic 1 - Aspect 3 Detail Detail
o Topic 2 - Aspect 3 Detail Detail
Topic Sentence:
o Conclusion Summary of main points
Evaluation and/or possible future developments
Source referenced: http://www.efl.arts.gla.ac.uk/CampusOnly/essays/15web.htm
