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AHMET ERDEMOGLU

WRT 101 001N

September 18, 2017

Composition I

Ms. Gadsden

Some things we need to use with their harm and disadvantages

In the present time tvs and the phones are very necessary. We use them every day almost every second. They help us to find a variety of information in the blink of eye that we need in daily life, entertain us, helps communicate with other people, however unfortunately, those benefits outweigh from the disadvantages when it is not used in good ways and properly. These things keep us from completing what we supposed to do in daily life. Therefore, it becomes very harmful because it prevents you from communicating with your friend and takes a lot of time.

Firstly, tvs and the phones sometimes discourage communication. Children start to talk less when they get their first phone. For instance, as it's known, there are a lot of parents who buy and give their children smartphones at the little age. When parents do this the kids start to cut the connection with their families and with other people, they go to somewhere with their friends and they all sit and play with their phones instead of doing some fun things like playing hide and seek, soccer, basketball etc.  This is an example of what kids do in the present day. This pretty explains that these little gadget ruins communication with our families and with other people.

Moreover, the phone is very convenient. It helps us to do the homework, to check daily news every day and to communicate with others.  However, just because it’s that simple to look for what we want with just one click it pushes us to waste a lot of times to play video games, watch movie, which can be very harmful if we don’t know when we should stop. Another example, when I got my first phone, I was playing a lot of games and spent lots of time watching movies. All my grades went down. I was going to fail from all my classes if my parents didn’t take my phone away.

However, phones are not harmful all the time, just like they have bad sides, at the same time, phones have a lot of good sides. Phones are one of the main gadgets that are leading technology. As a matter of fact, they help our lives to get easier. Now, kids started to get their first phones at the age of between eight and ten. Even elderly people use phones because they must, if they do not, they cannot call anybody.

Therefore, some people can say that the phones are not harmful at all, but it is they just don’t want to believe it. They must accept that spending a lot of time on phone very harmful. Not just because wasting a lot of time on it, but also it decreases the communication in the house and everywhere. People start to learn when to use and not use our devices.