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Cultural Immersion Report

Writing Workshop

Author:________________________________________

Peer Editor #1 :______________________________

Format: does it match?

Top to bottom:

1. Typed draft, title page

2. Note sheet

3. Assignment sheet/scoring guide

If something is missing, write it on the top of the draft.

Check if correct/ arrow if missing:

· 1-inch margins

· 12 pt. font, plain font

· Title Page: Cultural Immersion Report, bolded centered

· Drop to bottom: name, Schacht, USem am/pm, submission date, not bolded, centered

· Cultural Immersion Report (top centered bolded)

· Heading: Name, Date, Venue, Group, bolded, left

· Section subtitles: numbered & bolded, left

· Green print eliminated

· Single spaced, but

· Single space between sections

· Artifact: photo within and explained

· Word count printed at the end

Peer Editor #2 :______________________________

Content: Are paragraphs complete thoughts,

or merely answering questions?

· Has detail, evidence (highlight detail)

· Need more detail, give a star

· Does NOT use “you” (draw an X though “you”)

· 7-9 sentences in each paragraph

· the paragraphs are all similar lengths

· write suggestions on the paper itself

Peer Editor #3 :______________________________

Technical Language: is it direct and formal?

· Cross out really, very, thing, a lot, stuff, many, interesting, basically, literally

· Cross out contractions (can’t, won’t)

· Circle any words which could use more direct & effective vocabulary

· Underline poetry, metaphor, or flowery language

· Underline conversational tone, any words or phrases which sound chatty or involve slang.

· Highlight (new color) unique & intriguing phrases

Cultural Immersion Report

Writing Workshop

Author:________________________________________

Peer Editor #1 :______________________________

Format: does it match?

Top to bottom:

1. Typed draft, title page

2. Note sheet

3. Assignment sheet/scoring guide

If something is missing, write it on the top of the draft.

Check if correct/ arrow if missing:

· 1-inch margins

· 12 pt. font, plain font

· Title Page: Cultural Immersion Report, bolded centered

· Drop to bottom: name, Schacht, USem am/pm, submission date, not bolded, centered

· Cultural Immersion Report (top centered bolded)

· Heading: Name, Date, Venue, Group, bolded, left

· Section subtitles: numbered & bolded, left

· Green print eliminated

· Single spaced, but

· Single space between sections

· Artifact: photo within and explained

· Word count printed at the end

Peer Editor #2 :______________________________

Content: Are paragraphs complete thoughts,

or merely answering questions?

· Has detail, evidence (highlight detail)

· Need more detail, give a star

· Does NOT use “you” (draw an X though “you”)

· 7-9 sentences in each paragraph

· the paragraphs are all similar lengths

· write suggestions on the paper itself

Peer Editor #3 :______________________________

Technical Language: is it direct and formal?

· Cross out really, very, thing, a lot, stuff, many, interesting, basically, literally

· Cross out contractions (can’t, won’t)

· Circle any words which could use more direct & effective vocabulary

· Underline poetry, metaphor, or flowery language

· Underline conversational tone, any words or phrases which sound chatty or involve slang.

· Highlight (new color) unique & intriguing phrases