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Student Name

Li Ma

Outlining Stage

Shine’s Feedback

The evaluation items highlighted in green should be revised before you start writing your definition essay.

Thesis Statement:

- A: Your Key Term [noun]

- B: Body paragraph key words (Roadmap)

- C: Differentiation

- Perspective (class/category)

Body 1 (Method: | Meaning: )

- Match the order of the roadmap in

your thesis?

- Suitable method for the 1st body?

- Evidence relevant to the method?

- Suitable evidence to support your

thesis?

- Proper citation?

Body 2 (Method: | Meaning: )

1) Evidence:

2) Evidence:

- Match the order of the roadmap in

your thesis?

- Suitable method for the 2nd body?

- Evidence relevant to the method?

- Suitable evidence to support your

thesis?

- Proper citation?

Body 3 (Method: | Meaning: )

1) Evidence:

2) Evidence:

- Match the order of the roadmap in

your thesis?

- Suitable method for the 3rd body?

- Evidence relevant to the method?

- Suitable evidence to support your

thesis?

- Proper citation?

References (List your sources in alphabetical order. Organize them in APA.)

- Proper academic sources

- Correct APA

Hook

Introductory Sentence

Connection Sentence

Thesis

Assertion

Explanation

Evidence 1

Discussion

Evidence 2

Discussion

Conclusion

Assertion

Explanation

Evidence 1

Discussion

Evidence 2

Discussion

Conclusion

Assertion

Explanation

Evidence 1

Discussion

Evidence 2

Discussion

Conclusion

Rephrase your thesis & summarize your key points in short.