| Course Code | Class Code | Assignment Title | Total Points |
| NRS-493 | NRS-493-O500 | PICOT Question Paper | 60.0 |
| Criteria | Percentage | Unsatisfactory (0.00%) | Less Than Satisfactory (75.00%) | Satisfactory (79.00%) | Good (89.00%) | Excellent (100.00%) | Comments | Points Earned |
| Content | 80.0% |
| PICOT Question | 20.0% | A PICOT question is not presented. | An incomplete PICOT question is presented. The PICOT does not follow the correct format. | A PICOT question is presented. The PICOT generally follows the correct format. | A PICOT question is presented. Some detail is needed for clarity. | A PICOT question is presented and provides a clear framework for the capstone project change proposal. | I would add the word "how" before "does" as you don't have a yes/no question. Also, I would not imply the outcome, so I would remove the word "reduce" and simply say "affect." | 9.48/12.00 |
| Nursing Intervention | 20.0% | The intervention and comparison are omitted | The intervention used to address the problem is not based on a nursing practice intervention. A comparison of the nursing intervention to a patient population not currently receiving the nursing intervention, and timeframe needed to implement the change process, are omitted. | A nursing intervention used to address the problem is presented. A comparison of the nursing intervention to a patient population not currently receiving the nursing intervention, and timeframe needed to implement the change process, are summarized. Some information is needed. There are minor inaccuracies. | A nursing intervention used to address the problem is presented. A comparison of the nursing intervention to a patient population not currently receiving the nursing intervention, and timeframe needed to implement the change process, are discussed. | A nursing intervention used to address the problem is clearly presented. A comparison of the nursing intervention to a patient population not currently receiving the nursing intervention, and timeframe needed to implement the change process, are thoroughly discussed. | Nursing intervention could be further developed. | 9.48/12.00 |
| Clinical Problem and Patient Outcome | 20.0% | The clinical problem and how it can result in a positive patient outcome are omitted. | The clinical problem and how it can result in a positive patient outcome are incomplete. | The clinical problem and how it can result in a positive patient outcome are summarized. More information and rationale are needed. | The clinical problem and how it can result in a positive patient outcome are presented. Some minor detail is needed for clarity. | The clinical problem and how it can result in a positive patient outcome are thoroughly discussed. Strong rationale is offered for support. | Clinical problem is clear, but the outcome could be further developed | 9.48/12.00 |
| PICOT Problem | 20.0% | The PICOT problem as it relates to evidence-based solution, nursing intervention, patent care, health care agency, and nursing practice is omitted. | The PICOT problem as it relates to evidence-based solution, nursing intervention, patent care, health care agency, and nursing practice is incomplete. | The PICOT problem as it relates to evidence-based solution, nursing intervention, patent care, health care agency, and nursing practice is summarized. More information and rationale are needed. | The PICOT problem as it relates to evidence-based solution, nursing intervention, patent care, health care agency, and nursing practice is described. Some minor detail is needed for clarity. | The PICOT problem as it relates to evidence-based solution, nursing intervention, patent care, health care agency, and nursing practice is described. Some minor detail is needed for clarity. | | 10.68/12.00 |
| Organization, Effectiveness, and Format | 20.0% |
| Thesis Development and Purpose | 5.0% | Paper lacks any discernible overall purpose or organizing claim. | Thesis is insufficiently developed or vague. Purpose is not clear. | Thesis is apparent and appropriate to purpose. | Thesis is clear and forecasts the development of the paper. Thesis is descriptive and reflective of the arguments and appropriate to the purpose. | Thesis is comprehensive and contains the essence of the paper. Thesis statement makes the purpose of the paper clear. | The thesis statement should be the last sentence of the intro paragraph. I would recommend saying something like, "The purpose of this essay is..." | 2.37/3.00 |
| Argument Logic and Construction | 5.0% | Statement of purpose is not justified by the conclusion. The conclusion does not support the claim made. Argument is incoherent and uses noncredible sources. | Sufficient justification of claims is lacking. Argument lacks consistent unity. There are obvious flaws in the logic. Some sources have questionable credibility. | Argument is orderly but may have a few inconsistencies. The argument presents minimal justification of claims. Argument logically, but not thoroughly, supports the purpose. Sources used are credible. Introduction and conclusion bracket the thesis. | Argument shows logical progression. Techniques of argumentation are evident. There is a smooth progression of claims from introduction to conclusion. Most sources are authoritative. | Clear and convincing argument presents a persuasive claim in a distinctive and compelling manner. All sources are authoritative. | | 3.00/3.00 |
| Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling, punctuation, grammar, language use) | 5.0% | Surface errors are pervasive enough that they impede communication of meaning. Inappropriate word choice or sentence construction is used. | Frequent and repetitive mechanical errors distract the reader. Inconsistencies in language choice (register), sentence structure, or word choice are present. | Some mechanical errors or typos are present, but they are not overly distracting to the reader. Correct sentence structure and audience-appropriate language are used. | Prose is largely free of mechanical errors, although a few may be present. A variety of sentence structures and effective figures of speech are used. | Writer is clearly in command of standard, written, academic English. | Paragraphs should be at least three sentences. | 2.67/3.00 |
| Paper Format (use of appropriate style for the major and assignment) | 2.0% | Template is not used appropriately, or documentation format is rarely followed correctly. | Template is used, but some elements are missing or mistaken; lack of control with formatting is apparent. | Template is used, and formatting is correct, although some minor errors may be present. | Template is fully used; There are virtually no errors in formatting style. | All format elements are correct. | You should include a title page. Headers should be bolded and centered. | 0.95/1.20 |
| Documentation of Sources (citations, footnotes, references, bibliography, etc., as appropriate to assignment and style) | 3.0% | Sources are not documented. | Documentation of sources is inconsistent or incorrect, as appropriate to assignment and style, with numerous formatting errors. | Sources are documented, as appropriate to assignment and style, although some formatting errors may be present. | Sources are documented, as appropriate to assignment and style, and format is mostly correct. | Sources are completely and correctly documented, as appropriate to assignment and style, and format is free of error. | Be sure to italicize your journal name. | 1.60/1.80 |
| Total Weightage | 100% | | | | | | | | 49.71/60.0 |
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