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Legalization of Marijuana

Michael Clines

Grantham University

21 December 2018

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Marijuana legalization has been debatable for quite an extended period. This is because some of the people arguing that marijuana has medicinal value and other claiming that it is very harmful to the health of the people. This is critically bringing the issues about the legality of the use of the bhang. Some of the medicinal value of the legalizing use of marijuana includes that slow and stops cancer cells from spreading. This helps in increasing survival and the cure for the people who are infected with cancer. As a result of this value many people argue that they should legalize marijuana. It is also essential in that it helps in preventing Alzheimer’s. This is through lowering the progression of Alzheimer’s diseases (Hall & Weier 2017). Comment by Michael Clines: Good start, but work on a more engaging introduction to "hook" your reader. Comment by Michael Clines: Comment by Michael Clines: The introduction should end with a clear thesis statement. Comment by Michael Clines:

Due to its therapeutic value of the marijuana many people and lawmakers they argue that it should be legalized for people to use without being threatened to be arrested by the police. They also say that it helps in the treatment of the Glaucoma. It increases the pressure in the eyeball, injuring the optic nerve and causing loss of vision. Marijuana use it helps in killing the brain cells and potentially leading to Alzheimer’s diseases. Others people argue that legalization of marijuana will have so many adverse health effects. I could personally say that marijuana should not be legalized due to its harmful effects (Hall & Weier 2017). Comment by Michael Clines: The opposing viewpoint should be included in your counterargument/rebuttal paragraph. Comment by Michael Clines:

Today marijuana is unlawful because the examination has demonstrated some inebriating impacts. For example, fantasy, tension, sadness, extreme inconstancy of state of mind, neurosis and schizophrenia enduring up to six hours. Even though cannabis causes beginning eagerness, energy, and now and then violent, rash conduct, pacing and moving, the fundamental picture is of diminished physical movement separated from discourse. Physical impacts incorporate blushing of the eyes, dryness of the mouth and throat, a moderate increment in pulse, snugness in the Chest, languor, shakiness, and ungraceful muscular constriction.

When marijuana is legalized, it will have different effects on people. It leads to short-term memory problems and causes very stage behavior, seeing, hearing or smelling things that aren’t the, not being able to tell imagination from reality. The morals and ethics of the people using marijuana are compromised. Increased risk of stroke and lowering reaction time affects the health of marijuana users, and this causes the many addicts to have poor health, and therefore, this legalization of marijuana should not be accepted (McGinty, et.al, 2016).

There is proof that exhibits both the damages and medical advantages of cannabis. However in spite of the development over the recent long stretches of comprehensive, breakthrough surveys of the logical examinations assessing the benefits and damages of the medication, obviously more research is expected to decide the general wellbeing ramifications of rising marijuana utilize completely (McGinty, et.al, 2016).

Cannabis ought to be sanctioned for both recreational and therapeutic utilize because the US economy can receive critical rewards from authorization and also make convergence of employment and furthermore to diminish road and posse question identifying with pot. Additionally, cannabis ought to be sanctioned because it has been managed an out of line hand by society. Legalization of marijuana it helps in reducing Harm, The criminalization of cannabis use excessively harm youngsters and minorities, supports large dimensions of savagery and debasement, and neglects to check youth get to (Hall & Weier 2017). Comment by Michael Clines: you have made several good points here, but your essay is not as well-organized as it should be. Please see the assignment details for the structure of the Persuasive Essay. It might help to create an outline before working on your final draft. On to revision! Comment by Michael Clines:

Create Jobs, Authorizing and managing weed will bring one of the country's biggest money trims under the standard of law. This will make employment and monetary open doors in the formal economy rather than the illegal market (McGinty, et.al, 2016).

References

Hall, W., & Weier, M. (2017). Has marijuana legalization increased marijuana use among US youth?. JAMA pediatrics, 171(2), 116-118.

McGinty, E. E., Samples, H., Bandara, S. N., Saloner, B., Bachhuber, M. A., & Barry, C. L. (2016). The emerging public discourse on state legalization of marijuana for recreational use in the US: Analysis of news media coverage, 2010–2014. Preventive medicine, 90, 114-120.