BIOTECHNOLOGY PAPER

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Unacceptable Below60% F

Meets Minimum Expectations 60-69% D

Fair 70-79% C

Proficient 80- 89% B

Exemplary 90- 100% A

1. Describe the biotechnology and what it accomplishes, including if it involves manipulating DNA/RNA or just using it.

0 (0%) - 14.39 (17.99%) Did not submit or incompletely/inaccurately described the biotechnology and what it accomplishes, including if it involves manipulating DNA/RNA or just using it.

14.4 (18%) - 16.79 (20.99%) Insufficiently described the biotechnology and what it accomplishes, including if it involves manipulating DNA/RNA or just using it.

16.8 (21%) - 19.19 (23.99%)

Partially described the biotechnology and what it accomplishes, including if it involves manipulating DNA/RNA or just using it.

19.2 (24%) - 21.59 (26.99%) Satisfactorily described the biotechnology and what it accomplishes, including if it involves manipulating DNA/RNA or just using it.

21.6 (30%)

2.Provide a full and complete description of exactly how the technology works.

0 (0%) - 14.39 (17.99%) Did not submit or incompletely/inaccurately provided a full and complete description of exactly how the technology works.

14.4 (18%) - 16.79 (20.99%) Insufficiently provided a full and complete description of exactly how the technology works.

16.8 (21%) - 19.19 (23.99%)

Partially provided a full and complete description of exactly how the technology works.

19.2 (24%) - 21.59 (26.99%) Satisfactorily provided a full and complete description of exactly how the technology works.

21.6 (30%)

3.Discuss the key biological principles that underlie the technology.

0 (0%) - 14.39 (17.99%) Did not submit or incompletely/inaccurately discussed the key biological principles that underlie the technology.

15.6 (19.5%)

14.4 (18%) - 16.79 (20.99%)

Insufficiently discussed the key

16.8 (21%) - 19.19 (23.99%)

Partially discussed the key biological principles that underlie the technology.

19.2 (24%) - 21.59 (26.99%) Satisfactorily discussed the key biological principles that underlie the technology.

21.6 (30%)

Thoroughly discussed the key biological principles that underlie the technology.

Name: SCI 115 Assignment 2: Biological Basis

Description: SCI 115 Assignment 2: Biological Basis 1188

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biological principles that underlie the technology.

4. Application of the SWS standards for citation.

0 (0%) - 2.4 (3%) Lack of in-text citations and / or lack of reference section.

2.6 (3.25%)

2.4 (3%) - 2.8 (3.5%)

In-text citations and references are given, but not in SWS format.

2.8 (3.5%) - 3.2 (4%) In-text citations and references are provided, but they are only partially formatted correctly in SWS style.

3.2 (4%) - 3.6 (4.5%)

Most in-text citations and references are provided, and they are generally formatted correctly in SWS style.

3.6 In-text citations and references are error free or almost error free and consistently formatted correctly in SWS style.

5. Use of proper written mechanics.

0 (0%) - 2.4 (3%) Student did not submit the assignment or there are so many errors that work is confusing to read.

2.4 (3%) - 2.8 (3.5%)

Multiple errors (7-8) in grammar and mechanics.

2.8 (3.5%) - 3.2 (4%) Several errors (5-6) in grammar and mechanics.

3.4 (4.25%)

3.2 (4%) - 3.6 (4.5%)

A few errors (3-4) in grammar and mechanics.

3.6 Minimal (0-2) errors in grammar and mechanics.

Raw Total: 67.20 (of 80.0)

Feedback to Learner

Hi Joanna - You earned a grade of B on your paper (84%). This paper has a good foundation, but there are several areas needing more detail and explanation. Please review my feedback below. Let's get to the detailed feedback for your paper. This is an excellent summary of the article. Joanna, your summary is clearly written, and very well organized which made it easy to follow. You provided all the important details and facts to about the article. Overall, Joanna, you were able to include all of the biological concepts from the article that relate to the course. Your explanation, Joanna on how the article caught your attention is vague or indirect. Include information that relates the article to your life and to issues that are important to you. When you explore funding sources for the research, you want to provide details on how research on this topic should be funded. We must consider all funding sources whether private or public. This is a good attempt at the SWS (Strayer Writing standards). Joanna, if you need assistance understanding SWS then please reach out to either me or Dr. Cox so that we may assist you. Strayer Writing Standards Sample Paper Joanna, I appreciate you taking the time to review my feedback. Remember, if you have any questions or concerns, please email me at [email protected], or call or text me at 678-525-0561. -Trinna Johnson

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