Argument Paper Rough Draft

Replacing humans with robots

Brandon Battle

Replacing humans with robots

I believe Watch out for falling into first person (we/I) and second person (you). Academic writing should be in the third person that replacing humans will yield more and better results. As the world is changing and advancing daily it is believed that replacing humans with robots will yield better results in the organization, the replacement of humans with robots has brought about a major concern about the bleak future of employment in the world this is because robots are believed to be taking over and they are replacing humans in the workforce as they are believed to be productive and yield more results. These concerns are brought about by the technology that is emerging every day as the technology is able to automate intellectual tasks through cognitive computing; they are able to tackle physical tasks as well as customer care services from self-service to store scanners (Nehaniv & Dautenhahn, 2009).

What happened to your thesis statement from last week? (“Replacing [the] Human Work Force with Robots has [more] detrimental effects than benefits because it; has a high displacement effects and leads to upsurge of crime rate however, it has also created jobs in different sectors.”) You want your thesis to be the last sentence in your introduction.

Unemployment

Replacing humans in the workforce with robots is believed to will better results in the company. Robots are believed to transform the workforce hence organizations believe that replacing humans with robots in the organization is a better option (Becker & Ries, 2018). As the technology that is emerging is important and very real and many people will lose their jobs because they are being replaced by the robots, the future of employment is not that gloomy as we

believe it to be watch out for those pesky run-on sentences this is because automation will lead to the growth of many new employment opportunities as some brand new job categories will emerge. The employment sector will have a major job transformation effect as humans will work side by side with the robots. Provide more details about the “new employment opportunities.”

Advanced capitalism

Robots will lead to the reduction of the management of the company employing human workers as the organization will be required to only purchase machines and not pay the human workers wages and salaries. The organization will manage and invest the money that they would have spent paying wages and salaries as profit back into the company creating more capital; this diversifies the money that would have been spent on one individual hence maximizing the organization's profit. The organizations would argue that the income of many human employees will be maintained in the company meaning that they are able to afford more machinery as opposed to when they would be paying the salaries for a thousand people.

You have a lot of great details in this body paragraph, but without a clear thesis I cannot address how well they support it. Each body paragraph should support the thesis by identifying and analyzing key points.

Effectiveness

Machines and robots are believed to be highly efficient as they are able to perform many tasks faster than humans this makes working with robots efficient as the performance of most duties in the company will be efficient and it will be done on time. An organization will purchase many types of machinery which will be able to produce more goods and services within a very short duration of time enabling the organization too beat all deadlines ensuring that there are no delays in the production of their products and services (Becker & Ries, 2018). Machines are also efficient in that they don’t tire and get exhausted like humans do this enables them to perform tasks more efficiently as opposed to human labor a machine or robot is also not governed by the laws of labor meaning that they can work overtime as opposed to humans eight hours per day limit.

Efficient

Machines are believed to be sufficient and efficient as they are able to produce products that are similar in shape and size as a machine will operate in the same manner and not vary with time hence it produces goods of the same standard which is important when producing goods in mass production and the organization is required to deliver and produce goods that are similar to one another (Nehaniv & Dautenhahn, 2009). This simplifies the work when testing the quality of the goods as only a sample is required. Stay on track—not everything you learn about machines and robots belongs in this paper. You want every detail you use to support your thesis.

Trustworthy

As opposed to human’s machines are not vulnerable to corruption, corruption being a major root of evil in many third world countries. Machines are therefore employed so as to root out the corruption in an organization as a machine is only capable of applying one equal standard to all the situations regardless of the situation at hand as opposed to humans who are prone to taking bribes and being biased (Stefoff, 2007). Unless you work this idea of trustworthiness into your thesis, this information does not belong in your paper.

Conclusion.

Machines also have their disadvantages as they are cannot fully replace humans this is because the machines are not able to think on their own or conform to the current situation at hand as a machine cannot be able to adjust to the situation making it impossible for it to be the best at all times (Stefoff, 2007). Machines are not able to make changes without commands or notice that changes are required to be made at a given time when the environment requires a different way of operation whereas humans are able to adjust and make changes accordingly.

Conclusions should return to the thesis statement and “reach a decision or judgment about the merits of the subject,” (Lester, 2018, p. 213). They should not introduce new ideas.

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