Discussion - Introductions with peer review
For this discussion, review the 3 attached resources, then compose two Introductions for your Researched Argumentative Essay (Topic: Replacing old equipment with new ones in medical facilities). The introductions should demonstrate different approaches, using different words and phrasing. Only the thesis statement will remain similar. Then, in a third paragraph, share your thoughts about which introduction you are most likely to use and why.
A few reminders:
· Paragraph 1 will be your first possible introduction.
· Paragraph 2 will be your second possible introduction.
· Paragraph 3 will be your commentary on both introductions.
· Write only in 3rd person point of view (No direct address – “You would be shocked at the waste of edible foods!”).
· Do not announce the topic (Example: This paper will discuss the importance of donkey farming to nomad societies in Northern Africa; In this essay, or, In this essay, I will...).
· If you use a source in your introduction, such as for a statistic, you should cite it and reference the material.