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week2discussion2.docxRespond to classmate Julie Hilton 125 word or more
Yesterday Dec 14 at 7:09pm
Introduction and Outline Worksheet Your Name: Julie Hilton Date: 12/13/2017 Read through the guide that follows this worksheet. Create an introductory paragraph. Include the following parts: Method of getting reader's attention Background information Thesis statement with plan of development There can be no certainty in life, only in death. That can mean different things to different people. I have had the privilege of knowing and loving someone that didn’t know death was lurking around the corner. How could he? He was only 19 years old when his last breath was taken. He lived each day with intention. Not the intention of dying, but the intention of living life to the fullest. There is a lot that I have learned from him in life and in death that I would like to share with others; his story and his legacy. Complete the rest of your outline. Brief notes for each section will suffice. It is pure freedom to live life confidently with your head held high. Stay true to yourself Live the way you want, but with intention to achieve greatness Stand up for those that are getting bullied Living with confidence and standing up for others is an inspiring way to walk on this earth. There are times when a person can make their mark on this earth and never realize the lasting impact that they make. Alex had an amazing impact on his older and younger brothers (B and C due to technical issues) Alex impacted his peers because he stood up for them. Alex impacted his father and me by his ferocity There are lessons that can be taught by living souls and lessons still to be learned by the spirits that we carry with us every day. While Alex left this world too soon, his legacy and his spirit are still teaching and guiding those that knew and loved him. His youngest brother still respects and appreciates the values that Alex instilled I am following my life ambition Perseverance to “keep on keepin’ on” There are many things to be learned from the living, but there are incredible lessons to be learned the departed. It is an amazing liberty to live life the way that you want and in the direction, that life leads you. You never know when your next breath will be your last, so don’t waste it. Stand up for those that need standing up for, take unexpected obstacles as they come, be true to who you are. CONCLUSION: The best lesson I have learned is from someone that no longer walks this earth or breathes this air. It is an amazing challenge to live life with intention. It is a challenge that I feel Alex gave to many when he departed. He had an appeal to live life conventionally and on his own terms. There is no second chance, make the chances you get count! The outcome may end in trauma and disaster, but it is better than wondering “what if?”
Introduction and Outline Worksheet
Your Name: Julie Hilton
Date: 12/13/2017
1. Read through the guide that follows this worksheet.
1. Create an introductory paragraph. Include the following parts:
3. Method of getting reader's attention
3. Background information
3. Thesis statement with plan of development
There can be no certainty in life, only in death. That can mean different things to different people. I have had the privilege of knowing and loving someone that didn’t know death was lurking around the corner. How could he? He was only 19 years old when his last breath was taken. He lived each day with intention. Not the intention of dying, but the intention of living life to the fullest. There is a lot that I have learned from him in life and in death that I would like to share with others; his story and his legacy.
1. Complete the rest of your outline. Brief notes for each section will suffice.
4. It is pure freedom to live life confidently with your head held high.
1. Stay true to yourself
1. Live the way you want, but with intention to achieve greatness
6. Stand up for those that are getting bullied
6. Living with confidence and standing up for others is an inspiring way to walk on this earth.
1. There are times when a person can make their mark on this earth and never realize the lasting impact that they make.
1. Alex had an amazing impact on his older and younger brothers
1. (B and C due to technical issues) Alex impacted his peers because he stood up for them. Alex impacted his father and me by his ferocity
2. There are lessons that can be taught by living souls and lessons still to be learned by the spirits that we carry with us every day.
. While Alex left this world too soon, his legacy and his spirit are still teaching and guiding those that knew and loved him.
1. His youngest brother still respects and appreciates the values that Alex instilled
1. I am following my life ambition
1. Perseverance to “keep on keepin’ on”
1. There are many things to be learned from the living, but there are incredible lessons to be learned the departed.
1. It is an amazing liberty to live life the way that you want and in the direction, that life leads you. You never know when your next breath will be your last, so don’t waste it. Stand up for those that need standing up for, take unexpected obstacles as they come, be true to who you are.
1. CONCLUSION: The best lesson I have learned is from someone that no longer walks this earth or breathes this air. It is an amazing challenge to live life with intention. It is a challenge that I feel Alex gave to many when he departed. He had an appeal to live life conventionally and on his own terms. There is no second chance, make the chances you get count! The outcome may end in trauma and disaster, but it is better than wondering “what if?”
Respond to classmate LaKaya Pinkney 125 words or more
Yesterday Dec 14 at 7:25pm
Hello Classmates, Introduction and Outline Worksheet Student Name: LaKaya PinkneyDate: 12/14/171. Read through the guide that follows this worksheet.2. Create an introductory paragraph. Include the following parts:A. Method of getting reader's attentionB. Background informationC. Thesis statement with plan of development Being a mother has always been my plan in life. After becoming an adult and seeing family and friends start their own families, I developed jealousy, and insecurities. I had always thought something was wrong with me physically because of passed traumatic experiences. I am now learning hot to regain faith and believe that positive things will happen. 3. Complete the rest of your outline. Brief notes for each section will suffice.I. I have always wanted to be a mother.A. I always played house with my siblings and preschool friends. B. My siblings called me the nurturer of the family. C. My nickname was “Momma Sis”. That name stuck with me over the years and today we joke a lot about it. D. I was the one my parents depended on. II. Parents who are busy, can be dangerous for your children.A. Having busy parents and older siblings who were busy too was frustrating. B. Unfortunately one day I was left with the wrong relative. C. Leroy did some very inappropriate things to me that day. D.The cousin that I looked up to hurt me without remorse. III. When I met my husband it was truly amazing.A. The day that I met him he told me that I was going to be his wife. B. I became Mrs Pinkney a year after William and I met. C. We are fearful that we can never have a baby because of the past event. D. The doctor gave us the approval to keep trying to conceive. IV. CONCLUSION: Our plans on trying to conceive are in motion. We have recently visited a specialist whois willing to help us through this process. Dr. Cooke has many years of experience. Test haveshown that we are both healthy and the green light has been given. It has been eight-teen years oftrying. Most people would have given up by now. I think if we follow the doctor’s orders we willbe just fine. We are keeping our fingers crossed on this journey. Statement of Purpose I wrote my personal essay about "My Journey to Become a Mommy. This topic is very important to me. I thought I would share something about myself that no one knew. I think my story will help other people who may be going through the same experiences. I would like to think someone could find strength in how I express myself. Thank You, LaKaya
Hello Classmates,
Introduction and Outline Worksheet
Student Name: LaKaya Pinkney Date: 12/14/17 1. Read through the guide that follows this worksheet. 2. Create an introductory paragraph. Include the following parts: A. Method of getting reader's attention B. Background information C. Thesis statement with plan of development
Being a mother has always been my plan in life. After becoming an adult and seeing family and friends start their own families, I developed jealousy, and insecurities. I had always thought something was wrong with me physically because of passed traumatic experiences. I am now learning hot to regain faith and believe that positive things will happen.
3. Complete the rest of your outline. Brief notes for each section will suffice. I. I have always wanted to be a mother. A. I always played house with my siblings and preschool friends. B. My siblings called me the nurturer of the family. C. My nickname was “Momma Sis”. That name stuck with me over the years and today we joke a lot about it. D. I was the one my parents depended on.
II. Parents who are busy, can be dangerous for your children. A. Having busy parents and older siblings who were busy too was frustrating. B. Unfortunately one day I was left with the wrong relative. C. Leroy did some very inappropriate things to me that day.
D.The cousin that I looked up to hurt me without remorse.
III. When I met my husband it was truly amazing. A. The day that I met him he told me that I was going to be his wife. B. I became Mrs Pinkney a year after William and I met.
C. We are fearful that we can never have a baby because of the past event. D. The doctor gave us the approval to keep trying to conceive. IV. CONCLUSION: Our plans on trying to conceive are in motion. We have recently visited a specialist who is willing to help us through this process. Dr. Cooke has many years of experience. Test have shown that we are both healthy and the green light has been given. It has been eight-teen years of trying. Most people would have given up by now. I think if we follow the doctor’s orders we will be just fine. We are keeping our fingers crossed on this journey.
Statement of Purpose
I wrote my personal essay about "My Journey to Become a Mommy. This topic is very important to me. I thought I would share something about myself that no one knew. I think my story will help other people who may be going through the same experiences. I would like to think someone could find strength in how I express myself.
Thank You,
LaKaya
