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4/10/2019 Week 2 - Assignment: Malodree Johnson

https://ashford.instructure.com/courses/42242/assignments/846305/submissions/45676 1/2

Comeka - thank you for this week's paper. I would like to see you expand on the topics on the rest of your papers in this course. Some of the claims you have made throughout the paper should have had scholarly sources to support them. An example of this would be where you discussed Cleveland's declining population as a threat to the Cleveland Clinic. You also discussed mergers and acquisitions, but again, had nothing to support those claims. Additionally, none of the content for Cleveland Clinic's SWOT analysis was taken directly from their web site. Some of your sentences and paragraphs are not fully developed and there are several spacing issues throughout the paper that appear to try and help meet the page requirement. By fully developing the topics, you will meet that page requirement naturally. Similarity Percentage: 3% (great) Dr. Scherr

(1.52 / 2.00); : Analyzes the Organization’s Strengths, Including its Resources and Capabilities That Can Be Used As a Basis for Developing a Competitive Advantage

Basic - Minimally analyzes the strengths of an organization, including its resources and capabilities that can be used as a basis for developing a competitive advantage. Relevant details are missing.

(1.52 / 2.00); : Analyzes the Organization’s Weaknesses, Including its Limitations to Meet the Needs of Its Determined Customer Base

Basic - Minimally analyzes of the weaknesses of the organization including its limitations to meet the needs of its determined customer base. Relevant details are missing.

(1.52 / 2.00); : Analyzes the Organization’s Opportunities, Including the External Conditions That May Reveal Certain New Opportunities Regarding Profit and Growth

Basic - Minimally analyzes the organization's opportunities, including the external conditions that may reveal certain new opportunities for profit and growth. Relevant details are missing.

(1.52 / 2.00); : Analyzes the Organization’s Threats Including Factors or Changes in the External Environment That May Present Threats to the Organization

Basic - Minimally analyzes the threats to the selected organization. Includes some of the factors or changes in the external environment that may present threats to the organization. Relevant details are missing.

(0.76 / 1.00); : Provides Recommendations to The CEO of the Chosen Health Care Organization and States How This Will Be Used To Create a Marketing Plan That Will Ensure the Organizations Resources Are Not Wasted, Time is Well Spent, and Marketing is efficiency Is Improved

Basic - Provides somewhat relevant and limited recommendations to the health care organizations CEO. Minimally includes how resources will be used and allocated, time is spent, and marketing efficiency improved.  Relevant details are missing.

(0.22 / 0.25); : Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Proficient - Displays comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains only a few minor errors and is mostly easy to understand.

(0.22 / 0.25); : Written Communication: APA Formatting

Proficient - Exhibits APA formatting throughout the paper. However, layout contains a few minor errors. 

(0.22 / 0.25); : Written Communication: Page Requirement

Proficient - The length of the paper is nearly equivalent to the required number of correctly formatted pages. 

(0.22 / 0.25); : Written Communication: Resource Requirement

Proficient - Uses the required number of scholarly sources to support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and cited correctly within the body of the assignment.

Overall Score: 7.72 / 10.00 Overall Grade: 7.72

4/10/2019 Week 2 - Assignment: Malodree Johnson

https://ashford.instructure.com/courses/42242/assignments/846305/submissions/45676 2/2