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Running head: MY WEDDING CEREMONY 1

MY WEDDING CEREMONY 3

My Wedding Ceremony

My wedding ceremony was a great pleasure to all my family members and acquaintances. Relatives and friends also attended my occasion where they cherished the moment. [The second sentence repeats ideas from your first sentence. In the first sentence you say “family members and acquaintances” and in the second sentence you say the same thing, but use synonyms, or words that mean the same (“relatives and friends”). To correct this, I recommend combining the two sentences together so that separate nouns are not needed.] My wedding was performed on 20th last month where I drew immense gratification during the event. [Your assignment description says to be very specific and vivid – which mean you should use details. Give the month’s name. Instead of saying “20th last month, say December 20th.] It was held in my church. I was the first person to begin the marriage ceremony in our family beforehand. It was honored with great enthusiasm. Preparations for marriage began two months before the occasion. My parents and siblings spent almost one-week making essential purchases. [Again, use details. “Essential purchases” like what?] My room was color washed, and the doors were also republished. [“Republished” means to be available for public viewing a second time. Do you mean “refurbished,” which means redecorated?] They purchased gold ornaments for me and clothes for relatives and family members. Several invitation cards were distributed to my relatives and friends. Therefore, my wedding celebration was a beautiful opportunity in my life.

The fleet of cars arrived in our home and I and my parents were driven to the church, where the congregation and groom were. The vehicle I boarded was decorated with white ribbon and flowers which was tied outside. [Subject – Verb agreement is when the number of the subject matches the number of the verb. This means that a singular subject must have a singular verb, and that a plural subject must have a plural verb. For example: They (plural subject) were (plural verb) going shopping after church. Your previous sentence contains an error with subject – verb agreement; to correct this, change the second verb in the sentence to a plural verb.] Wedding guests’ cars had the uniform decorations which formed the wedding cortege and followed the newly wedding car to the venue. Guests, friends, and relatives were obliged to be in the church on time. The ushers directed the guests to their specific seats.

The groomsmen and bridesmaids stood nearby where the best man and maid of honor stood closest to my groom and me. I walked down the aisle wearing a veil and wedding dress. It was our turn to exchange the vows. The preacher said “dear congregation, we have gathered here today to witness the ceremony for Natalie and Arnold in marriage. If a person feels that couples should not be in union through Holy Matrimony, hold your peace forever or speak now.” There was silence in the background. I was engulfed with bliss because no one disagreed with our marriage. When our turn to exchange our ring reached, I said, “let this ring be a symbol and reminder of my faith, my love and my covenant to grow and learn together, am honored to call you, my husband.” Then my groom said, “This ring I give you to symbolize love for you, may it remind you every moment that my enduring love engulfs you.” The crowd applauded and cheered at the same time. They started blowing whistles as a sign of demonstrating excitement. We moved to the reception. The meal during the event was delicious. [Think of a narrative as something pertaining to the 5 senses when giving details. Pick a few key ideas to describe, and give visual representation (What did the cake look like?), sound description (How loud did guests cheer? Or how silent was the church during the vows?), taste (What flavor was the cake? What was served for dinner?) Details will make your story memorable. But make sure to still tell the story.]

The cooks served meals to the guest and us. The day was awesome. Cold-drinks and fresh fruits were available for the guest. [Check word numbers match your meaning. You often use the singular form of words instead of the needed plural word. In the previous sentence, you say “guest”. Guest is one visitor, when I am sure you mean many.] I received my gifts from friends and church members. We smiled with great affection and adoration. The wedding cake was served as the music amused people. I was overwhelmed with awe and joy.

After the hospitality, it came to a session of taking still photos. The photos included parents, relatives, siblings, bridesmaids and us. I received congratulations from the crowd. It was a delightful experience which will always flow in my mind. It indeed marked the beginning of my parenthood as well as the new family. [Your entire narrative is about your wedding, but the final line of you paper talks about parenthood. A marriage and parenting are two different ideas. This ending is confusing and off -topic. I recommend choosing a different ending that stays on the topic of your wedding.