Discussion

Rewrite the

paragraphs

with corrections and

punctuation

fixes.

1)

The founder of

(

V.O.W

) is

a domestic

violence

and child abuse

survivor

she

’

s

a writer and

entrepreneur,

w

ho

holds a BS Degree in Human

Resources

management

and

advanced training in

Bus

iness

Administration, currently

pursui

ng a Master

’

s

degree to become

a mental health Councilor

.

The

author of

Blueblack tears of a

father

&

child

,

Shades

of

B

lue and the upcoming book

Freed. I

donates to

the house of

Ruth, The

men mission for the homeless,

Volunteers

at

Bea

G

addy

’

s

family center

an

d is

currently a mentor for cadet

tes girl scouts.

2)

The inspiration for

vow is my mother

. She

is a Domestic

Violence

and abuse

survivor

.

I

was

born into what appeared to be a normal family.

However, beneath the surface, was an ugly and

painful reality that would

have

an

impact on my

family

’

s

life.

Abuse

is not love!

It is a

sickness;

Make

no

mistake;

abus

e plagues many homes and lives.

Although

it

’s

painful for me to recount

and relive the pain th

at happen in our

lives,

my

hope

is that VOW can help

women

to

improve

the

ir

quality

of life.

Counseling and therapy deals with the symptoms, but only time and prayer

can heal the wounds.

3)

The mission of Voices

of

Wome

n

is to help woman to overcome their domestic violence and or abuse

issues by providing tools,

reso

urces

and support for

today,

as

we

create hope for their

tomorrow

.

4)

Should woman need help with services such as:

PLEASE GIVE A DESCRITION OF EACH BULLET POINT

·

Counseling

·

Life Coach

·

Housing

·

Child care

·

Women

’s Health

·

Defense Classes

·

Job search

·

Continuing

Education

·

Finances

·

Credit Repair

Rewrite the paragraphs with corrections and punctuation fixes.

1)The founder of (V.O.W) is a domestic violence and child abuse survivor she’s a writer and

entrepreneur, who holds a BS Degree in Human Resources management and advanced training in

Business Administration, currently pursuing a Master’s degree to become a mental health Councilor. The

author of Blueblack tears of a father&child, Shades of Blue and the upcoming book Freed. I donates to

the house of Ruth, The men mission for the homeless, Volunteers at Bea Gaddy’s family center and is

currently a mentor for cadettes girl scouts.

2)The inspiration for vow is my mother. She is a Domestic Violence and abuse survivor .I was

born into what appeared to be a normal family. However, beneath the surface, was an ugly and

painful reality that would have an impact on my family’s life. Abuse is not love! It is a sickness;

Make no mistake; abuse plagues many homes and lives. Although it’s painful for me to recount

and relive the pain that happen in our lives, my hope is that VOW can help women to improve

their quality of life. Counseling and therapy deals with the symptoms, but only time and prayer

can heal the wounds.

3)The mission of Voices of Women is to help woman to overcome their domestic violence and or abuse

issues by providing tools, resources and support for today, as we create hope for their tomorrow.

4)Should woman need help with services such as:

PLEASE GIVE A DESCRITION OF EACH BULLET POINT

 Counseling

 Life Coach

 Housing

 Child care

 Women’s Health

 Defense Classes

 Job search

 Continuing Education

 Finances

 Credit Repair