36350 - Revision Order

Evaluation Results

Requirement : Survey of United States History: UTT Task 3

AUTHOR:

DATE EVALUATED: 03/05/2019 06:00:07 PM (MDT) FINAL SCORE

DRF TEMPLATE: Survey of United States History (UG, C121, UTT1- Does not

0615)

Meet PROGRAM: Survey of U.S. History (UG, C121, UTT1-0615)

EVALUATION METHOD : Using Rubric

General comments:

3/5/2019 This thoughtful submission explains how the passage of the 14th Amendment, Black Codes and

sharecropping system contributed to race relations during Reconstruction and describes how urbanization

was a consequence of industrialization. The essay adequately explains the Social Gospel Movement that

promoted Christianity to find solutions to social problems and describes how Labor Reform helped define

the Progressive Era. The passage of the 19th Amendment providing women the right to vote is discussed

and there is a satisfactory presentation explaining US imperialism through the annexation of Hawaii and

Spanish American War. Fully developed discussions describing a second consequence of industrialization

and describing a second reform Movement that helped define the Progressive Era are not apparent.

Detailed Results

( Rubric used : UTT (0615) Task 3)

ARTICULATION OF RESPONSE (CLARITY, ORGANIZATION, MECHANICS)

0 . 1. 1=NEEDS 2. 2=COMPETENT

0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT IMPROVEMENT PRESENT

The candidate provides The candidate provides The candidate provides

unsatisfactory articulation of weak articulation of adequate articulation of

response. response. response.

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CRITERION SCORE :

2.00

A. CHANGES IN RACE RELATIONS

0 . 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT

PRESENT

The candidate does not

provide a logical discussion

of 3 major changes in race

relations that resulted from

Reconstruction.

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT The candidate provides a

logical discussion, with

insufficient support, of 3

major changes in race

relations that resulted from

Reconstruction.

2. 2=COMPETENT The candidate provides a

logical discussion, with

sufficient support, of 3

major changes, in race

relations that resulted

from Reconstruction.

CRITERION SCORE :

2.00

B. CONSEQUENCES OF INDUSTRIALIZATION

0 . 1. 1=NEEDS 2. 2=COMPETENT

0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT IMPROVEMENT PRESENT

The candidate does not The candidate provides an The candidate provides an provide an appropriate appropriate description, appropriate description, description of 2 with insufficient detail, of with sufficient detail, of 2 consequences of 2 consequences of consequences of industrialization on American industrialization on industrialization on politics and/or society. American politics and/or American politics and/or society. society.

CRITERION SCORE : Printed on: 03/13/2019 02:01:18 PM (EST)

1.00

COMMENTS ON THIS CRITERION:

3/5/2019 The essay explains that towns developed around industries creation social class

tensions. A discussion explaining a second consequence of industrialization on American politics

and/or society is not evident.

For instruction on Consequences of Industrialization, please revisit Chapter 16 ("Building Factories,

Building Cities, 1877-1920") and Chapter 17 ("Gilded Age Politics, 1877-1900") of the textbook A

People and A Nation: A History of the United States, Brief by clicking on the link located in

the top left in this rubric item's name, "Consequences of Industrialization."

C1 . PROMOTING PROGRESSIVE REFORMS

0 . 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT

PRESENT

The candidate does not

provide an accurate

description of the role of

religion and social morality in

promoting Progressive

reforms.

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT The candidate provides an

accurate description, with

insufficient detail, of the

role of religion and social

morality in promoting

Progressive reforms.

2. 2=COMPETENT The candidate provides an

accurate description, with

sufficient detail, of the role

of religion and social

morality in promoting

Progressive reforms.

CRITERION SCORE :

2.00

C2 . REFORM MOVEMENTS DEFINING THE PROGRESSIVE ERA

0 . 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT

PRESENT

The candidate does not

provide an accurate

description of 2 reform Printed on: 03/13/2019 02:01:18 PM (EST)

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

The candidate provides an

accurate description, with

insufficient detail, of 2

2. 2=COMPETENT The candidate provides an

accurate description, with

sufficient detail, of 2

movements that helped to reform movements that

define the Progressive Era. helped to define the

Progressive Era.

CRITERION SCORE :

1.00

reform movements that

helped to define the

Progressive Era.

COMMENTS ON THIS CRITERION:

3/5/2019 Labor Reform is described. A discussion describing a second reform Movement that

helped define the Progressive Era is not apparent.

For instruction on Reform Movements Defining the Progressive Era, please revisit Chapter 18 ("The

Progressive Era, 1895-1920") of the textbook A People and A Nation: A History of the United

States, Brief by clicking on the link located in the top left in this rubric item's name, "Reform

Movements Defining the Progressive Era."

C3 . IMPACT OF THE PROGRESSIVE MOVEMENT

0 . 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT

PRESENT

The candidate does not

provide a logical discussion

of 1 impact of the

Progressive movement on

American politics.

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT The candidate provides a

logical discussion, with

insufficient detail, of 1

impact of the Progressive

movement on American

politics.

2. 2=COMPETENT The candidate provides a

logical discussion, with

sufficient detail, of 1

impact of the Progressive

movement on American

politics.

CRITERION SCORE :

2.00

D. ROLE OF AMERICAN IMPERIALISM

0 . 1. 1=NEEDS 2. 2=COMPETENT

0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT IMPROVEMENT Printed on: 03/13/2019 02:01:18 PM (EST)

PRESENT

The candidate does not

provide a logical explanation

of the role of American

imperialism in leading the

United States into any of the

given conflicts.

The candidate provides a

logical explanation, with

insufficient detail, of the

role of American

imperialism in leading the

United States into 2 of the

given conflicts.

The candidate provides a

logical explanation, with

sufficient detail, of the role

of American imperialism in

leading the United States

into 2 of the given conflicts.

CRITERION SCORE :

2.00

E. SOURCE ACKNOWLEDGEMENT

0 . 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT

PRESENT

There is evidence of quoted,

paraphrased, or summarized

content without

acknowledgement of source

information in in-text citations

and references.

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT The candidate provides insufficient acknowledgement of source information, using in-text citations and references, for quoted, paraphrased, and summarized content.

2. 2=COMPETENT The candidate provides

sufficient acknowledgement

of source information, using

in-text citations and

references, for all quoted,

paraphrased, and

summarized content.

CRITERION SCORE :

2.00

E1. SOURCE INFORMATION

0 . 1. 1=NEEDS 2. 2=COMPETENT

0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT IMPROVEMENT PRESENT

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The candidate does not The candidate includes the The candidate includes the

include the given points given points, with given points, with accurate

when providing source incomplete or inaccurate and complete information,

references. information, when when providing source

providing source references. references.

CRITERION SCORE :

2.00 Printed on: 03/13/2019 02:01:18 PM (EST)