psychology

Peer2 Positive feedback can have a strong and positive impact. Please highlight something specific you liked in your peer's work. Let them know what was done really well and why they might want to continue doing that in their future work.

I love your writing style, how everything flows smoothly from one sentence to the next!!

Now it’s time to give constructive feedback. If your peer was going to change just one thing about their work, what change would improve it the most? And what are some ways they might go about making that change? Please remember everything you have learned about giving constructive feedback when you write this, and try your best to deliver your suggestions in a helpful tone that will minimize the triggering of a fight/flight reflex.

To improve, I suggest that you summarize the given article of spontaneous thought rather than finding your own articles about. The articles you found can still be incorporated with your summary, however, they should be integrated within the main article we have to summarize for this essay, which is "Narrative thinking lingers in spontaneous thought". Also, you should come up with your own proposed experiment that extends the research of the initial study, such as testing people's memory retention between different topics (interesting vs boring).