psychology

Peer6 Positive feedback can have a strong and positive impact. Please highlight something specific you liked in your peer's work. Let them know what was done really well and why they might want to continue doing that in their future work.

Hypothesis and reasoning behind experiments are discussed and presented well. The topic of the paper is discussed well in the introduction and body of your writing,

Now it’s time to give constructive feedback. If your peer was going to change just one thing about their work, what change would improve it the most? And what are some ways they might go about making that change? Please remember everything you have learned about giving constructive feedback when you write this, and try your best to deliver your suggestions in a helpful tone that will minimize the triggering of a fight/flight reflex.

Moving forward, you should look to add more details of the experiment itself from the paper because more theory, in general, is mentioned but try to relate it back to the aim of the study. Additionally, provide more details on your experimental extension of this study and add more explanation to how it would correlate to the findings.