psychology

Peer4 Positive feedback can have a strong and positive impact. Please highlight something specific you liked in your peer's work. Let them know what was done really well and why they might want to continue doing that in their future work.

The thing i think about your essay is that you have a nice structure. Many transitions make your essay organized. You have an excellent job on your citation.

Now it’s time to give constructive feedback. If your peer was going to change just one thing about their work, what change would improve it the most? And what are some ways they might go about making that change? Please remember everything you have learned about giving constructive feedback when you write this, and try your best to deliver your suggestions in a helpful tone that will minimize the triggering of a fight/flight reflex.

In my opinion, you can add some information about how experiment is conducted in the reading and which method is used in the experiment.