Unit2WritingExercise.docx

Unit 2 Writing Exercise

Now that you have read about writing an essay (specifically an argumentative essay) and revising an essay, let’s look at how we can develop a successful WPE response essay.

Instructions: First , read your essay prompt, which is as follows:

Measles is a highly contagious disease that spreads through the air, with symptoms that include fever, runny nose and a blotchy rash. Read the following article relating to the current measles outbreaks in the United States and write a response to the following question. Who should decide who gets vaccinated against measles: lawmakers or parents?

Article: California lawmakers seek to end 'personal belief' vaccine exemptions

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Reuters

By Dan Whitcomb and Michael Fleeman

Feb. 4, 2015

LOS ANGELES (Reuters) - Responding to an outbreak of measles that has infected more than 100 people, two California lawmakers said on Wednesday they would introduce legislation to end the right of parents in the state to exempt their children from school vaccinations based on personal beliefs.

California public health officials say 92 people have been diagnosed with measles in the state, many of them linked to an outbreak that they believe began when an infected person from outside the country visited Disneyland in late December.

More than a dozen other cases have been confirmed in 19 other U.S. states and Mexico, renewing a debate over the so-called anti-vaccination movement in which fears about potential side effects of vaccines, fueled by now-debunked science, have led a small minority of parents to refuse to allow their children to be vaccinated.

"The high number of unvaccinated students is jeopardizing public health not only in schools but in the broader community. We need to take steps to keep our schools safe and our students healthy,” state Senator Ben Allen said in a written statement announcing the legislation he is co-sponsoring with fellow Democrat Richard Pan.

The measure would make California the 33rd state to bar parents from opting out of vaccinations based on personal beliefs.

Also on Wednesday, a top Los Angeles County health official said that a total of 21 cases have been recorded in the county but that after the initial wave of reports, the number has fallen to four in the latest two-week period.

“We're getting to a number of cases that’s manageable, and I'm hopeful that within weeks or a couple of months we will be able to turn the corner on this particular outbreak,” Interim Health Officer Dr. Jeffrey Gunzenhauser told a press conference, although he cautioned that a lag in reporting could still add a few more cases.

A day care center at a high school in the Los Angeles suburb of Santa Monica closed earlier this week and more than a dozen infants placed under a three-week quarantine after a baby enrolled in the program was diagnosed with measles.

Measles was declared eliminated in the United States in 2000 after decades of intensive childhood vaccine efforts. But last year the nation had its highest number of measles cases in two decades.

Most people recover from measles within a few weeks, although it can be fatal in some cases.

Next, before you write your essay, answer the following questions:

1. An essay should include a thesis statement that identifies its main idea and answers the prompt question being asked. What side will you be arguing for your essay? What is the thesis statement of your essay?

2. An essay needs to include evidence—details and examples—to support its thesis. What evidence will you provide to support your ideas? Highlight some evidence from the prompt article to use in your essay.

3. An essay’s conclusion should include a summary statement that reinforces the thesis and main idea of the essay and helps unify the essay. What is your essay’s summary statement?

4. An essay should include transitions that indicate how ideas are connected. How will you use transitions in this essay?

Lastly, write out your essay below using the tips and skills you learned about in your Unit 1 & 2 readings. Submit your essay as an assignment attachment (Word file) via Canvas.