Two--Inside Llewyn Davis
assignment sheet.docx
English 102: Proctor
Analytical Essay Guidelines
Assignment: For our next assignment, you are to write a 4-6 page analytical essay on Joel and Ethan Coen’s Inside Llewyn Davis (2013); this thesis driven essay should answer an interpretive question regarding the film. Generate a thesis that addresses this prompt. Please include a title, heading, margins, and page numbers in proper MLA format. The paper should be double-spaced in 12-point Times New Roman font. The essay must be submitted to Canvas by the due date.
***Secondary Source Requirement: You must use multiple direct quotations from the secondary source material supplied by the instructor. The best use of quotations is to develop your analysis through supporting claims in the body of the essay. Use of a secondary source is required; be sure to list all sources (secondary and primary) in a Works Cited page. Proper MLA citation format is also required.***
Approach:
· You may explore the role of a single motif.
· You will want to explore how the motif shapes the nature of an idea; more than identifying a theme, how does the text define a concept or promote a viewpoint?
· You have latitude to self-determine here. But, yes, you will want to watch the film again while taking careful notes. The film is available for streaming through the Swank Motion Pictures database.
Potential topics:
· Circularity is a dominant motif in the film. The film begins with its ending, numerous journeys are round trip, and the records that play the ‘timeless’ folk songs do so by going round and round. Often this motif is shown to be in tension with the demands for productivity by Llewyn’s society. What do the Coens communicate with this theme and its contextualization?
· The cat (which is both one cat and three) seems an important symbol in the film. He makes a return journey like his namesake, Ulysses. He (or she) is Llewyn’s only friend. Moreover, the film seems to grant the cat both spiritual and moral weight as Llewyn’s abandonment of the cat strikes us as a transgression. Write an essay in which you assert the significance of the cat in the film.
· The film challenges us to separate or combine the artist and their art. It explores to what degree our apprehension of the artist should be connected to their art. We may not like Llewyn, but how does that affect our feelings about liking his work? Write an essay in which you explore the evaluation of the artist and their art.
· The film is about a specific moment in the history of pop music—the American folk revival of the fifties and sixties. Write an essay on how the film utilizes musical performance to communicate.
· A topic of your own development…
Introduction and Thesis: Bottom line: the essay MUST have a thesis. A thesis is a statement that comes as the last sentence of the introductory paragraph. It is not a statement of fact: it is a claim that you will support with the body of the essay.
· So, “In Ferris Bueller’s Day Off, Ferris is able to outwit all of the adults” is not a thesis.
· “Ferris Bueller’s Day Off is about rebelling against authority” is not a very good thesis.
· Something like, “Ferris Bueller’s Day Off uses an idealized teen hero to model what a meaningful, productive—rather than merely lazy—rebellion against flawed authority might look like” is much better. Of course this thesis could be improved to define what effective rebellion “looks like.”
Form: This multi-paragraph essay should begin with an introduction culminating in a thesis statement, present a series of body paragraphs that begin with topic sentences, and end with a conclusion. You must support claims with specific evidence from the text: this means that you will have to specifically describe formal elements of the film and use quoted dialogue from the film. Imagine that your reader has seen the film a year or so ago; you will have to describe evidence to give your reader a vivid mental picture of the evidence.
A Word on Style: Style is a complex concern, but as the most basic level we want to employ formal collegiate prose. Analyze using the present tense; avoid slang or casual phrasing; use the third-person and do not use personal pronouns (I, you, me); choose active verb constructions whenever possible.
Feel free to visit my office hours for help developing a topic or evidence, or even just to run an idea by me. The ACE and NetTutor are also available for assistance; be sure to supply this assignment sheet to your ACE tutor or NetTutor.
Essay Rubric-1 (1).docx
Essay Grading Rubric: Proctor Student Name:
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Submission: Was a copy of the essay properly submitted? Is the essay double-spaced in 12-point Times New Roman font? Does the essay include an MLA heading, title, staple, and page numbers? Is the essay properly formatted? Is it proper length?
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Introduction and Thesis: Does the essay begin with an effective introduction? Does the introduction begin by establishing the essay’s topic broadly? Does the introduction narrow by further defining the essay’s topics and preparing the reader for the thesis statement?
Does the intro conclude with a statement of thesis (a point)? Is the thesis arguable interpretation that is not a question or a statement of fact? In other words, the thesis must accomplish two goals: first, it must identify a feature of set of features through which is expresses meaning; second, it must make a claim as to how those features create a meaning that reflects upon our world.
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Organization: Do topic sentences clearly define a topic for the paragraph? Do paragraphs relate the topic to the thesis and introduction? Are topics ordered in a logic aimed at proving the thesis? That is, each paragraph should build upon the analysis of preceding paragraphs. · Writers should avoid artificial transitions such as “the first reason” or “another symbol.” These transitions often result from a lack of organizational logic. · Does the essay avoid organizing with narrative chronology? That is, when the body begins with “at the beginning of the story,” the essay often becomes summary rather than analysis. · Do paragraphs stay on topic and avoid topic shifts? Are relationships between sentences clear and logical?
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Claims, Evidence, and Explanations (Development): Does the body meaningfully engage source material to support a stated thesis? Do body paragraphs make claims, support claims with evidence, and explain the evidence? Do paragraphs support the thesis through examples, explanation, and analysis? Does the essay rely on relevant detail?
No paragraphs should be very short since each topic requires a full analytical process. Are required sources used? Does the essay avoid summary?
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Style: Does the essay use an academic tone and avoid casual phrasing? Does the essay argue and analyze in the present tense and reserve the past tense only for actual history? Does the prose use a variety of active sentence structures, avoiding reliance on “to be” verb forms? Does the essay set up use of quotations? Does the essay avoid use of personal pronouns (“I,” “you”) and imprecise terms (“things,” “stuff”)?
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Correctness: Is the essay nearly free of typographical errors? Does the essay contain fewer than 3 major grammatical errors? Does the essay use words correctly? Does the essay correctly use underlining, quotation marks, italics, and other forms of punctuation and emphasis? Does the essay incorporate quoted material grammatically? Does the essay correctly employ MLA format and citation? Does the essay contain factual errors?
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Synthesis: Does the author combine competency in the above criteria to generate an effective essay? Is one or more of the above criteria prohibitive to the overall effectiveness of the essay? Does the essay fulfill assigned requirements? Does the essay avoid “filler”?
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Total: (out of 100 points)
Superior: 100/100 Proficient: 93/100 Above Average: 87/100
Average: 83/100 Basic: 75/10 Needs Improvement: 67/100
Unsatisfactory: 60/100 Off-Assignment 50/100
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