Shehanh Alghamdi
Professor Bock
EN 102
October 28, 2018
Unintentional Plagiarism in Writing
Writing research papers is one fundamental academic activity in any college. Either
Students Required in various courses to write research essays, and papers on different topics,
given by the instructor or the students choose from various fields, As a culture in the school of
writing, students or rather learners would be required to collect different sources for the research
information. Some would use journal articles other would derive their information from websites
and other sources. As they begin compiling and writing their papers, every idea or information
used from the collected sources is to be cited appropriately and correctly. By definition,
unintentional plagiarism is plagiarism that results from failure to cite sources or rather disregard
of appropriate scholarly writing process. Commonly, unintentional plagiarism emanates from
failure to cite information that is not common knowledge as well as failure to paraphrase a
source despite proper citing. I have fallen prey to unintentional plagiarism because of the three
forms of paraphrase namely: the substitution technique, intra-sentential change technique, and
inter-sentential change technique. Notably, various studies show that there is a challenge that
most students face in their writing process – the problem of unintentional plagiarism. My writing
process is reflected in key factors discussed by the following articles: “Writing from sources,
writing from sentences” by Howard, Serviss, and Rodrigue, “Mother’s Tongue” By Amy Tan,
“Shitty First Drafts” by Anne Lamott, and “Learning to Praise” by Donald Daiker. Those key
factors are: Forms of paraphrasing as source of unintentional plagiarism, instructors requirements
and different English dialects contribute to unintentional plagiarism, and writing in portions or
rather portions reduces unintentional plagiarism also Praising students cultivates the habits of
reading to understand and summarize sources properly.
One factor that leads me and many other students to unintentional plagiarism is the
requirements from the instructors. Most of the time, professors require us to cite their sources
properly. Furthermore, they go ahead to award points to the students who have more sources for
their written work. For example, a professor in my class instructed us to cite fifteen sources for a
two-page research paper. The intention of the professor may have been to help us understand the
content in the sources and subsequently summarize in two pages. However, I feel this was too
cumbersome. Citing fifteen sources in the two-page essay is a way of encouraging plagiarism
among students who like me, have difficulties with the language. As a result, I would fill the
essay with both brief quotes and block quotes in the paper, with appropriate citations earn the
points as indicated in the grading rubric. This has been a common practice in many courses, and
colleges are producing graduates who are specialized in plagiarism. According to Howard,
Serviss, and (Rodrigue ), many professors are focusing on citation of sources rather than
students’ understanding of the cited sources. Many students drag and drop source statements,
either paraphrased or quoted into their written assignments, and pretend to have cited properly.
Nevertheless, an understanding of cited sources is required from students so that they can
summarize the main points of the source into their written work rather than stealing and
publishing other people’s work whether directly or indirectly. Howard, Serviss, and Rodrigue
carried out a study and found that out of eighteen students, none summarized the sources given.
Many students fall prey of copying and patchwriting. This is a result of teaching students to cite
their work appropriately regardless of their understanding of the source. I think instructors and
other academic facilitators should start encouraging students to read and understand the source
before citing. They should inculcate the practice of summarizing sources, which is an essential
practice in research writing.
Furthermore, I also engage in unintentional plagiarism because of my language
proficiency. I was and raised in an Arabic speaking family. As a result, my speaking and
understanding of the English Language are wanting. When given sources to read and summarize
in my writing, I tend to either copy or patchwriting. Notably, I do not patchwrite intentionally,
but because I have deficiencies in the language. (Tan) established that family background plays
important roles in a child’s language development. The kind of English tongue used in a family
setting could be transferred to class or rather an academic setting. Since instructions would
require students to write in acceptable English language, students would avoid their broken
tongues by plagiarizing the sources by either copying, paraphrasing or patchwriting. In other
words, my family background has had a lot of impact on my writing. When it comes to Arabic
writing, I am very fluent, and my language flows because I understand it very well.
Moreover, I have also been experiencing problems with first drafts. In fact, in all my
writing, I always score very poorly in the first draft. I make many writing mistakes including
grammar and spelling mistakes thereby losing a lot of points. However, upon revision,since my
professor usually helps in pointing out the mistakes, I score moderately well in the subsequent
drafts. (Lamott) in her essay “Shitty First Drafts” gives an account of her writing process. She
writes three drafts before having a final revised copy. This can be a great tool for avoiding
unintentional plagiarism in research writing. Educators and other academic facilitators should be
encouraging students to write papers in small parts to ensure they understand what they do. For
instance, recently, there are some courses, which break the writing process into small portions to
enable the student todo deep and comprehensive research before writing a final paper. Precisely,
the course required students to first, write an annotated bibliography with each source
summarized properly. Secondly, the students were to write first drafts to check for any forms of
plagiarism, whether intentional or unintentional. The professor would then check the drafts
specifically for any forms of plagiarism and give feedback to students. The feedback would help
students revise and correct any plagiarized parts of the written paper. The importance of this
process is that it teaches students to write formal and credible papers, rather than having patch
written and paraphrased papers.
Lastly, (Daiker ) discusses the importance of praising students in improving their writing
skills and abilities. One mistake that current educators make is to identify errors and mistakes
that students make in their written papers. They hardly find commendable parts of the essay. It
is, therefore, important to develop a culture of giving praiseworthy comments in addition to
pointing out plagiarized part. However, I have a professor who has been helping me write
efficiently. After marking my written paper, the professor points out the strengths and the
improvements I have made as well showing me the errors to correct. This has borne much fruit
because my writing skill is developing gradually. As such, teachers should develop the practice
of praising their students and pointing out major improvements to show the student that he or she
is making a difference in the learning process.
In conclusion, unintentional plagiarism has been one of the greatest challenges in my
academic writing journey. This results from the professor's requirements of writing where they
want us to cite the papers properly regardless of our understanding of the sources. Moreover, my
English language proficiency has been affected by Arabis thus leading me to either copy or patch
write. However, continues praise and encouragement from the professor has been of great
importance to my academic writing, and it has helped me reduce unintentional plagiarism.
Work Cited
● Daiker, D A.. "Learning to Praise." Concepts in Composition: Theory and Practice in the
Teaching of Writing (2011):References
● Howard, R M., T Serviss and T K. Rodrigue. "Writing from sources, writing from
sentences." Writing and Pedagogy 2.(2010): 177-192.
● Lamott, A. "Shitty First Drafts." Writing about writing: A college reader (2014):
527-531.
● Tan, A. "Mother's Tongue." Enriching ESOL Pedagogy: Readings and Activities for
Engagement (2002): 431-435.