Annual Report Project – Section 2

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Rubric

Points Available 30 GRADE EARNED 15.12 50.4%
Grading Criteria Far Below ( 0 - 71% ) Approach ( 72-75% ) Meet ( 76-83% ) Above Average ( 84-91% ) Excellent ( 92-100%)
Summary of the Management Discussion and Analysis (MD&A) A summary of the management discussion and analysis's four key points is not included. I posted a Loom Presentation on 08/20 on Section 2. I am not sure if you did not understand the assignment. You are to explain and summarize the MD&A for Amazon. Give us some background on what the MD&A is, and why companies may be required to provide this information. Next, identify 4 key points identified in the MD&A significant to the industry of your company and determine whether the data and the key point compliments each other or do they not align. A summary of the management discussion and analysis's four key points is present, but it lacks detail or is incomplete. A summary of the management discussion and analysis's four key points is present. A summary of the management discussion and analysis's four key points is clearly provided and well developed. A comprehensive summary of the articles four key points is thoroughly developed with supporting details. A comprehensive summary of the management discussion and analysis's four key points is thoroughly developed with supporting details.
Summary Analysis An analysis of the management summary that discusses the financial results is not included. I do not see this indicated. An analysis of the management summary that discusses the financial results is present, but it lacks detail or is incomplete. An analysis of the management summary that discusses the financial results is present. Examples are included but may be irrelevent or inaccurate. An analysis of the management summary that discusses the financial results is clearly provided and well developed. Examples are included. A comprehensive discussion of the article or press release and the financial implications and future relevance is thoroughly developed with supporting details. A comprehensive analysis of the management summary is thoroughly developed. Examples are included.
Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling, punctuation, grammar, language use) Surface errors are pervasive enough that they impede communication of meaning. Inappropriate word choice and/or sentence construction are used. Frequent and repetitive mechanical errors distract the reader. Inconsistencies in language choice (register), sentence structure, and/or word choice are present. Some mechanical errors or typos are present, but are not overly distracting to the reader. Correct sentence structure and audience-appropriate language are used. Prose is largely free of mechanical errors, although a few may be present. A variety of sentence structures and effective figures of speech are used. Writer is clearly in command of standard, written, academic English.
Paper Format (Use of appropriate style for the major and assignment) Template is not used appropriately, or documentation format is rarely followed correctly. Appropriate template is used, but some elements are missing or mistaken. A lack of control with formatting is apparent. I would like to see headers in your work in the future. Appropriate template is used. Formatting is correct, although some minor errors may be present. I don't understand your headers for this assignment. Appropriate template is fully used. There are virtually no errors in formatting style. All format elements are correct.
Research Citations (In-text citations for paraphrasing and direct quotes, and reference page listing and formatting, as appropriate to assignment) No citations are used. Citations are inconsistently used or incorrectly. Please review the examples in my Loom Presentations on how to properly list your references in APA 6th edition format. Each of these references contains errors to correct. If you are unsure, please reach out to me. Sources are appropriately documented, although some errors may be present. Documentation is appropriate and citation style is usually correct. In-text citations are complete and correct. The documentation of cited sources is free of error.
Percentage Points Available Rating (1 - 100%) Category Points Earned
Summary of the Management Discussion and Analysis (MD&A) 40% 12 72% Approach 8.64
Summary Analysis 30% 9 0% Far Below 0.00
Mechanics of Writing 10% 3 72% Approach 2.16
Paper Format 10% 3 72% Approach 2.16
Research Citations 10% 3 72% Approach 2.16
Total 100.0% 30 15.12
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