Touchstone 4

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Name: Abel Simorangkir Date: 5/4/21

Video URL:   Abel Simorangkir April 30 2021.MOV

Touchstone 3 Rubric and Feedback

Rubric Category

Feedback

Score

Organization

Speech structure meets all requirements (follows Monroe's Motivated Sequence, includes key message in introduction, includes main points and support in the body, and includes a conclusion).

25/25

Proficient

Persuasive

Speech takes a clear stance on an issue that impacts society and the arguments and approach are consistently persuasive in nature

18/20

Proficient

Use of Appeals

Uses all three kinds of appeals in multiple instances

18/20

Proficient

Balance of Appeals

Uses all three types of appeals effectively with a balance that is appropriate to the topic, purpose, and audience

17/20

Proficient

Language

Language is predominantly clear and appropriate to the audience, generally helping the audience connect with the speaker and the topic

15/15

Proficient

Overall Score:

93/100

Abel,

Overall, very well done! I appreciate the time that you devoted to this touchstone. Don’t forget to include a visual for your final touchstone as this is a requirement. I wish you the very best. Keep up the great work! Dr. Ward