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Comment from the professor for Topic 3: Rough Draft Quantitative Research Critique and Ethical Considerations

Feedback: You will want to review the feedback carefully and going forth, pay attention to structure a bit more carefully please

1. Introduction of Nursing Practice Problem, Purpose and Picot Question - Criteria Comments

Your PICOT is not correctly identified or written. You have two populations which is not appropriate And I see no true intervention versus comparison. This has to be corrected going forth

2. Method of Studies Criteria Comments

Quantitative refers to the type of data collected, it is not a research design method

3. Results of Studies– Criteria Comments

This section is very brief and contains no actual numerical or statistical data which is required as this is the kind of data collected

4. Results of Studies- Criteria Comments

Needed to discuss the results of each study, not a summary.

5. Ethical Considerations- Criteria Comments

Medical research? These are to be nursing research articles

6 Thesis, position or purpose- Criteria Comments

The purpose of this paper became a bit vague with the original picot not clear or stated correctly

The GCU template was only for you to capture your thoughts, not write the paper on. You were to use a word document and write a formal paper in APA format.